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Should we be told that our recommendations pertinent to the kind of use made of our vehicles have been accepted, we will gladly cooperate with the ultimate plan.
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(A) Should we be told that our recommendations pertinent to the kind of use made of our vehicles have been accepted, we will
"pertinent to the kind of use made of ... is very wordy. A better phrase would be 'for'
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(B) If we are told that recommendations about use of our vehicles has been accepted, we will
If we are told that recommendations ... This does not make sense with
about use of our vehicles has been acceptedSajjadAhmad
(C) Should we be told that our recommendations for the use of our vehicles have been accepted, we will
'Should' acts as a conditional. This goes with the action 'we will' This is clear. Correct subject / verb agreement
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(D) Our being told of the acceptance of our recommendations pertinent to use made of our vehicles should cause us to
our being should be
us since the act is on 'us'.
our being in this case is present perfect.
should cause us to is future tense. In addition, the phrase
recommendations pertinent to use made of is wordy.
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(E) Our being told of all recommendations about the use of our vehicles being accepted will cause us to
Same reasoning as D. Also,
our being told of all recommendations changes the meaning of the sentence. In addition
vehicles being accepted is used incorrectly.