abhijitsehgal
In the question below, the correct answer is C, which uses 'that' to modify people. Can anyone explain why?
The nutritionist defined an obese individual
as one handicapped by a severe excess of weight with difficulty refraining from eating.
(A) as one handicapped by a severe excess of weight with difficulty refraining from eating
(B) to be one that is handicapped by an excess of weight with difficulty refraining from eating
(C) as one that is handicapped by an excess of weight and that has difficulty refraining from eating
(D) to have difficulty refraining from eating and being handicapped by a severe excess of weight
(E) as having difficulty refraining from eating and handicapped by a severe excess of weight
Dear
abhijitsehgal,
I'm happy to respond.
The first thing I will say is, with all due respect: don't be naive. Don't naively assume that every single thing that some company out there calls a GMAT SC practice question is in fact up to the standards of the GMAT. The official questions are of tremendously high quality. A few other companies, such as
MGMAT and Veritas and
Magoosh, write very good questions as well. To be honest, I have seen some practice questions on this site that are atrocious. As a student, you can't afford to trust every single place that simply says, "
here's a high quality practice question!" You can't afford to be naive. You have to be discerning about the quality of the source.
What is the source of this question? At this link:
the-nutritionist-defined-an-obese-individual-200881.htmla user by the name of
dominicraj pointed out that the source of this is a company called "
Manhattan Review," which is NOT the same as
MGMAT!!
MGMAT is one of the finest companies in the GMAT prep space, but I have never heard of Manhattan Review. The name alone raises question: it would seem that a good portion of their marketing depends on folks confusing them with
MGMAT. This makes me very suspicious.
As for this particular question, even if the use of "
that" is technically correct in this case, I don't think this is something the GMAT would have. Also, something about the phrasing, even in the "correct" answer, is awkward. It lacks the elegance typical of official questions. I would say that you have stumbled onto a practice question that does not uphold the high standards of the GMAT. Don't worry about it. Just stick to high quality questions. Here's a high quality SC practice question:
https://gmat.magoosh.com/questions/3266When you submit your answer, the following page will have a video explanation.
Does all this make sense?
Mike