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The artisans of Mastonia were famous for their mastery over designing decorative mouldings or cornices for the ceilings which often had leaves and flowers carved on them.A. The artisans of Mastonia were famous for their mastery over designing decorative mouldings or cornices for the ceilings which often had leaves and flowers carved on them.
B. For their mastery over designing decorative mouldings or cornices for the ceilings, the artisans of Mastonia were famous and often had leaves and flowers carved on them.
C. The artisans of Mastonia, famous for their mastery over designing decorative mouldings or cornices for ceilings, often carved leaves and flowers on their creations.
D. The artisans of Mastonia, famous for their mastery over designing decorative mouldings or cornices for the ceilings, often carved leaves and flowers on them.
E. The artisans of Mastonia were famous for their mastery over designing decorative mouldings or cornices for the ceilings and often carving leaves and flowers on them.
The first thing to do always is to understand what the sentence tells us. This is what option (A) tells us.
It tells us that artisans were famous for their mastery over designing decorative mouldings or cornices for ceilings. These ceilings ('which' without the comma refers to 'ceilings') had leaves and flowers carved on them.
Now this is awkward, right? the 'decorative mouldings' are likely to have leaves and flowers, not the ceiling. The ceiling has the moulding. The moulding has the flowers. The artisans would be creating the decorations. The ceilings wouldn't come with decorations.
So what the likely meaning here is that the artisans were famous for their mastery over designing decorative mouldings for ceilings and that they carved flowers etc on these mouldings.
A. The artisans of Mastonia were famous for their mastery over designing decorative mouldings or cornices for the ceilings which often had leaves and flowers carved on them.
As we discussed, this meaning is not correct.
B. For their mastery over designing decorative mouldings or cornices for the ceilings, the artisans of Mastonia were famous and often had leaves and flowers carved on them.
We don't know what 'them' refers to. In fact, it seems to refer to 'artisans' here. ... the artisans were famous and often had leaves and flowers carved on them.
C. The artisans of Mastonia, famous for their mastery over designing decorative mouldings or cornices for ceilings, often carved leaves and flowers on their creations.
This makes sense. It tells us that the artisans were famous for their mastery over designing decorative mouldings or cornices for ceilings. It also tells us that they often carved leaves and flowers on their creations (so they carved leaves and flowers on deco mouldings or cornices).
D. The artisans of Mastonia, famous for their mastery over designing decorative mouldings or cornices for the ceilings, often carved leaves and flowers on them.
'them' has no clear referent.
E. The artisans of Mastonia were famous for their mastery over designing decorative mouldings or cornices for the ceilings and often carving leaves and flowers on them.
'them' has no clear referent. Also, use of 'carving' is incorrect. We need a verb phrase after 'and' so we need to say
The artisans were famous for .... and often carved leaves ...
Answer (C)