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IMO B

corporation is singular, so use of their is invalid

(B) to both its traditional values and
(C) both to its traditional values and -> does not maintain parallelism
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The CEO attributed the relative success of Framingham Corporation to both their traditional values and to the CFO’s innovative reorganization of the divisional income scheme.

(A) to both their traditional values and to
(B) to both its traditional values and
(C) both to its traditional values and
(D) both to their traditional values and
(E) both to their traditional values and to

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Split #1: pronoun error. Framingham Corporation is a collective noun: while it may have many employees, it is singular, and demands the singular pronoun, “its“. The pronoun “their” is incorrect, and choices (A) & (D) & (E) make this mistake.

Split #2: placement of the preposition and the correlative conjunctions:

(A) to both … and to … (once outside, once inside = incorrect)

(B) to both … and … (once outside = correct)

(C) both to … and … (once inside = incorrect)

(D) both to … and … (once inside = incorrect)

(E) both to … and to … (twice inside = correct)
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