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can anyone validate my reasoning for the first three options and provide some feedback.
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The financial hub of a business management information system (MIS) is accounting, the system of recording, analyzing, and reporting economic transactions. Hey Buddy, happy to help
. Before we go through each options just think the question from modifier and parallelism point of view. If we do so then the question becomes an easy one. In short, MIS is
accounting,
recording,
analyzing, and
reporting.
This is parallel and verb+ing modifiers are referring to same "MIS". Now, let's go over each options.a. The financial hub of a business management information system (MIS) is accounting, the system
of recording, analyzing, and reporting economic transactions.
( Who is the Noun modifier modifying? is it modifying accounting? The noun modifier starts from "the system ....transactions" ) - Correct. "accounting" itself is a verb+ing modifier so another verb+ing modifer cannot modify it. The subject "MIS" is the one getting modified or say referenced by each verb+ing. In this option, all verb+ing modifier refer to same subject "MIS". Remember the point above, MIS is
accounting,
recording,
analyzing, and
reporting.
b. The financial hub of a business management information system (MIS) is accounting, it is the system
of recording, analyzing, and reporting economic transactions.
( Is the ambiguity of "it" is the problem in this option? Also, the antecedent of it here could be system, accounting or financial hub) - Incorrect. You are correct "it" is an issue here. Though the major issue is parallelism, "and" is a parallel marker which means all the terms need to be parallel which are "accounting", "recroding", "analyzing", and "reporting". If we replace "it" with "MIS" then parallelism is disturbed. "MIS" is accounting, "MIS" is the system of recording,...... is incorrect. c. The financial hub of a business management information system (MIS), which is accounting, is the
system of recording, analyzing, and used to report economic transactions.
( Is this option wrong because of the meaning) - Incorrect. It is incorrect both meaning wise and parallelism wise. "which" refers to "MIS" and that leads to parallelism issue as explained in option (B). d.
A system of recording, analyzing, and reporting economic transactions, the financial hub of a business management information system (MIS) is accounting.
- Incorrect. We cannot keep "A system" far away from "MIS". This is incorrect because of meaning and structure.e.
A system of accounting is a business management information system (MIS)’s financial hub, in
that it is used to record, analyze, and report economic transactions.
- Incorrect. We cannot keep "A system" far away from "MIS" + (MIS)'s is possessive here. This is incorrect because of meaning and structure.