Akhilshah
Hi
GMATNinjaI think option 'c' - ( of a “theory of mind,” thus it is best) is wrong because of pronoun ambiguity and 'a' before “theory of mind,”.
", thus it is best" is the legit use as subordinate conjunction (Thus) can be used to join independent clause if it has right subject/pronoun and verb.
Your thoughts?
Thanks,
Akhil Shah
Remember that GMAT SC is about the BEST available option, not labelling individual choices as right or wrong in a vacuum.
For starters, is the "a" in (C)
wrong? Maybe not, but at best it's confusing and unnecessary. The use of "a" makes it sound like there multiple "theory of mind" domains, and we're only talking about one of them -- and that's odd.
Is the pronoun in (C)
wrong? Probably not, but at best it's confusing and unnecessary. (For more on how pronoun ambiguity isn't an absolute rule on the GMAT, check out
this video or
this newer one.)
Is the comma + "thus" in (C)
wrong? Maybe not, but the parallel structure in (D) is clearer and easier to follow. Why split the sentence into two "halves" when both parts should be tied back to the same subject?
If you can convince us why the second half of (C) should be treated as a subordinate clause and not an independent clause, that's great. Regardless, there's no good reason to split the sentence into two "halves," so the comma + "thus" in (C) is at best [drumroll please] confusing and unnecessary.
I hope that helps!