varotkorn wrote:
Dear
GMATGuruNYAccording to your post here:
https://gmatclub.com/forum/?href=.htmlWhy is it illogical if I were to added
COMMA + VERBing (before "creating") in C.?
IMO, the COMMA + VERBing could modify the preceding clause by showing the RESULT.
In other words, the production of emotional reactions (by lying)
creates or leads to physiological responses.
After all, lying instigates this whole chain. So, I think it is not wrong to say lying creates physiological responses.
Generally, COMMA + VERBing refers to the agent of the nearest preceding verb or action.
SC30 in the OG12:
Animal-hide shields with wooden frames were essential items of military equipment, protecting warriors against enemy arrows and spears.Here, COMMA +
protecting refers to
animal-hide shields -- the subject of the preceding verb in blue -- expressing that ANIMAL-HIDE SHIELDS were PROTECTING warriors.
Also:
If the original sentence conveys a logical meaning, the correct answer choice should retain that meaning.
Proposed revision of C:
Lying produces emotional reactions in an individual, creating, in turn, unconscious physiological responses.
Here, COMMA +
creating refers to
lying -- the subject of the preceding verb in blue -- implying that LYING is CREATING unconscious responses.
The intended meaning of the original sentence is that EMOTIONAL REACTIONS create unconscious responses.
The proposed revision of C does not convey the intended meaning of the original sentence and thus is not viable.
Another issue:
Typically, the usage of
in turn is appropriate in the following situation:
One entity performs an action upon a second entity.
In response, the second entity performs a similar action.
John tossed the ball to Maria, who IN TURN threw it to Amir.Here, JOHN tossed to MARIA.
In response, MARIA performed a similar action: she THREW.
In the proposed revision of C, both actions --
produces and
creating -- are attributed to the SAME ENTITY (lying).
As a result, the usage of
in turn is inappropriate.
In the OA,
in turn is used correctly.
OA:
Lying produces emotional reactions in an individual that, in turn, create unconscious physiological responses.Here, LYING produces REACTIONS.
In response, the REACTIONS perform a similar action: they CREATE.