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The westinghouse air brake, first demonstrated successfully in 1868, had been developed to such an extent by 1887 that a train of 50 freight cars traveling at 20 miles per hour could be brought to a standstill in the space of 171 feet,
whereas before they required 5 hand breakers over a distance of 1,500 feet for such a train to be stopped.(A) whereas before they required 5 hand breakers over a distance of 1,500 feet for such a train to be stopped.
(B) whereas previously 5 hand breakers operating over a distance of 1,500 feet had been required to stop such a train.
(C) but before stopping the train required 5 hand breakers operating over a distance of 1,500 feet.
(D) but previously they required 5 hand breakers over a distance of 1,500 feet stopping the train.
(E) but before stopping such a train required 5 hand breakers over a distance of 1,500 feet.
Meaning is crucial to solving this problem:Understanding the intended meaning is key to solving this question; the intended meaning of the crucial part of this sentence is that by 1887 a train of 50 freight cars traveling at 20 miles per hour could be brought to a standstill in the space of 171 feet by using Westinghouse air brake, and by contrast 5 hand breakers operating over a distance of 1,500 feet had been required to stop such a train, previously.
Concepts tested here: Meaning + PronounsA:1/ This answer choice suffers from a pronoun error, as the pronoun "they" lacks a clear and logical referent.
B: Correct.1/ This answer choice avoids the pronoun error seen in Options A and D, as it uses no pronouns.
2/ Option B uses the phrase "whereas previously 5 hand breakers...had been required to stop such a train", conveying the intended meaning - that by 1887 a train of 50 freight cars traveling at 20 miles per hour could be brought to a standstill in the space of 171 feet by using Westinghouse air brake,
and by contrast 5 hand breakers operating over a distance of 1,500 feet had been required to stop
any similar train, previously.
C:1/ This answer choice slightly alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "but before stopping the train"; the construction of this phrase incorrectly implies that by 1887 a train of 50 freight cars traveling at 20 miles per hour could be brought to a standstill in the space of 171 feet by using Westinghouse air brake,
despite the fact that 5 hand breakers operating over a distance of 1,500 feet had been required to stop
the same train, previously; the intended meaning is that by 1887 a train of 50 freight cars traveling at 20 miles per hour could be brought to a standstill in the space of 171 feet by using Westinghouse air brake,
and by contrast 5 hand breakers operating over a distance of 1,500 feet had been required to stop
any similar train, previously.
D:1/ This answer choice suffers from a pronoun error, as the pronoun "they" lacks a clear and logical referent.
2/ Option D alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "required 5 hand breakers...stopping the train"; the construction of this phrase leads to an incoherent meaning; the intended meaning is that by 1887 a train of 50 freight cars traveling at 20 miles per hour could be brought to a standstill in the space of 171 feet by using Westinghouse air brake, and by contrast 5 hand breakers operating over a distance of 1,500 feet had been required to stop such a train, previously.
E: Trap.
1/ This answer choice slightly alters the meaning of the sentence through the phrase "but before stopping such a train"; the construction of this phrase incorrectly implies that by 1887 a train of 50 freight cars traveling at 20 miles per hour could be brought to a standstill in the space of 171 feet by using Westinghouse air brake,
despite the fact that 5 hand breakers operating over a distance of 1,500 feet had been required to stop such a train, previously; the intended meaning is that by 1887 a train of 50 freight cars traveling at 20 miles per hour could be brought to a standstill in the space of 171 feet by using Westinghouse air brake,
and by contrast 5 hand breakers operating over a distance of 1,500 feet had been required to stop such a train, previously.
Hence, B is the best answer choice.All the best!
Experts' Global Team