Wow-
I can see where your handle is coming from. Please hire me someday
You have a very enviable profile and as a female, you will automatically have an advantage in the process. While it's true some schools (particularly the ivy league) like to see 3.75 GPAs, they will consider the fact you went to a top school and trust me, a 3.5 GPA is great and will not be disparaged. Hopefully you have some A's in your quant-based coursework and I am sure your major GPA was probably even higher. But I am grasping at straws here, since your GPA is not a true area of concern for me. Clearly you have good writing skills, so make sure you communicate clearly and concisely and don't make the mistake of other good writers I have seen by over-communicating. Sometimes good writers will endulge themselves and end up showing off a bit too much--being too flowery or overly descriptive can sometimes take the reader off track. I am sure you know this already. We do have one-off essay editing services if you ever want a second set of eyes. Might be a good idea considering your target list, where lots of applicants use professional consulting in various ways. The only thing I would say at first blush about "improving" your profile is more tied to things you didn't mention, such as making sure you tie your career acheivements specifically into your post MBA vision for consulting. Having a thread or theme which demonstrates intentionality in your decision making and career choices will help you appear mature beyond your years. You are a bit younger than the average applicant so this will be important. The good news is, lots of the top schools like bringing in young applicants, and at the end of the day, you will be given "credit" for all your work experience up until matricuation, so make sure you have a good plan for how you will use the next 12 months, and not just how you used the time up until the application. Let us know if we can help you pull it all together.
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Bryant Michaels
Admissions Consultant