Numerous research articles argue
(Main subject: Numerous research articles; Verb: argue)that the communicative pace of mundane life surprisingly may be so rapid that
(dependent clause modifying verb "argue")hinder the ability of some teenagers
( part of idiomatic phrase "so rapid that" modifying the verb)for distinguishing discrete notes and letters
(prepositional phrase modifying ability)and, the result is, to make sense of speech.
(second infinitive phrase modifying ability)A. that hinder the ability of some teenagers for distinguishing discrete notes and letters and, the result is, to make
i. It is not clear what is the subject for verb hinder it cannot be that and also that is a par of an idiomatic phrase it cannot refer to '"the communicative pace"
ii. Also there is subject-verb number agreement for "hinder"
iii. Use of "ability for" is incorrect it should be "ability to" .This gives rise to a parallelism issue with "to make sense of speech".
iv. The use of "the result is" in the middle is awkward.
B. so it hinders the ability of some teenagers to distinguish discrete notes and letters and, the result of this, they are unable to make
i. Use of "so rapid so" incorrect.
ii. "they are unable to make" parallel to " to distinguish discrete notes"
C. that it hinders the ability of some teenagers to distinguish discrete notes and letters, and results in not making
i. comma + and before " results in not making" is incorrect as it is not an independent clause to be connected by comma+FANBOYS.
D. that it hinders the ability of some teenagers to distinguish discrete notes and letters and, as a result, to make - correct
E. as to hinder the ability of some teenagers for distinguishing discrete notes and letters, resulting in being unable to make
i. use of "ability for' incorrect.
ii. Use of "being" suggests the continuity of not unable to make.
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