OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
THE PROMPTQuote:
Several marine biologists contend
that all of the millions of species housed in the planet’s oceans can be traced back to a single unicellular ancestor.
Meaning? Some marine biologists argue that all species in the oceans descend from a single unicellular ancestor.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) that all of the millions of species housed in the planet’s oceans can be traced back
• I do not see any issues
→ although the phrase
all of the millions of species may seem a bit long, the phrase is acceptable in a context that describes something quite radical about those many millions of species
→
traced back is idiomatic and commonly used in ancestry.
Take a quick look
here.
Quote:
B)
[THAT] the planet’s oceans house millions of species
of which all can be traced
• the verb
contend must be followed by
thatFor a good post on verbs and that-clauses, see
this post, here.
• Wrong meaning
→ Marine biologists do not contend that the oceans house millions of species. The latter is obvious.
The biologists contend that all those species come from one ancestor.
→ Why am I reading this option in such a way?
Look carefully at the option inserted into the sentence. The || lines show the "end' of the actual direct object
millions of species.What follows those || signs now looks less important than the millions of species themselves, but the "of which" material should not be relegated to the back seat:
Several marine biologists contend [THAT] the planet’s oceans house millions of species || of which all can be traced to a single unicellular ancestor.•
of which all sounds strange. The better construction would be: [COMMA] + [all of which]
ELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) that the planet’s oceans house millions of species
which are all traceable
•
which should be
that • WHICH/THAT
In British English,
which and
that are interchangeable.
In U.S. English and on the GMAT,
which and
that are not interchangeable.
→
which introduces nonessential information and is set off by commas
→
that introduces essential information and is almost never set off by commas
People debate whether GMAT will continue to observe the distinction between
which and
that. In at least one official question in the
nonunderlined portion,
which was used without commas to introduce essential modifiers.
On the other hand, I have never seen a correct answer choice (i.e., the underlined part) in which the word
which introduced essential material and was not set off by commas.
SPOILER ALERT: In addition, in 2020, GMAC published a new official question that tests this very distinction.
The question remains in the 2021 Official Guide. You can find that question
here.
• Option A is not plagued by "which."
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D)
[THAT] all of the millions of species housed in the planet’s oceans
to be traceable
• the verb
contend must be followed by
that•
to be is a diction disaster. Contend X to be Y? Ugh.
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E) that
the ability to trace all of the millions of species that are housed in the planet’s oceans
is attributable• nonsensical meaning
→ This sentence states that
the ability to trace [species]
is attributable to a single unicellular ancestor of those species.
→ Traceability is not created by a unicellular ancestor.
ELIMINATE E
The answer is A.COMMENTSDanTe02 ,
MB88 , and
dortinator1234923 , welcome to SC Butler.
MB88 , I answered your good question about "traced back" above.
As for general matters, rather than repeat myself . . . I'll tell you a true story.
When I was in fifth grade, my typically easygoing teacher was at the chalkboard, writing, his back to the class.
Out of character, I murmured something to a classmate.
The teacher whirled around, demanding, "Who was talking?!"
For a moment, I was startled by his speed and his unusual demeanor.
Then I answered, "It was I."
He started laughing.
The class was relieved. They had no idea why he was laughing.
They were just happy that he wasn't mad.
Why was he laughing?
"It was I" is correct.
Only a bookworm child of grammar-happy parents would answer that way
instinctively.
I'll let you all figure out why "It was I" is correct.
Some of you may know, in which case my flagging the issue doesn't matter.
Some of you may not know, in which case my merely highlighting the correct construction doesn't help much.
In a completely parallel universe, I would merely highlight, in red type, the
erroneous construction. Nothing else.
Kudos to good explanations.