Unlike a female grizzly bear in the Rockies, which typically occupies a range of 50 to 300 square miles, a male's range will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally as many as 600.
Important thing to note here is that the parallelism should be maintained.:-
1) Either Female bear should be compared with male bear.
2) or Female bear's range should be compared with male bear's range
A. Unlike a
female grizzly bear in the Rockies, which typically occupies a range of 50 to 300 square miles,
a male's range will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally as
WRONG COMPARISON
B. Unlike
the range of a female grizzly bear in the Rockies, typically occupying 50 to 300 square miles,
a male will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally so
WRONG COMPARISON
C. While the typical
range of a female grizzly bear in the Rockies is 50 to 300 square miles,
with males, their range can cover 200 to 500 square miles and occasionally so
WRONG COMPARISON
D. Whereas a
female grizzly bear in the Rockies typically occupies a range of 50 to 300 square miles,
a male will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally as
CORRECT COMPARISON
E. The typical
range of a female grizzly bear in the Rockies is 50 to 300 square miles,
unlike males, which will cover 200 to 500 square miles and occasionally as
WRONG COMPARISON
ANSWER IS D
KC wrote:
Unlike a female grizzly bear in the Rockies, which typically occupies a range of 50 to 300 square miles, a male’s range will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally as many as 600.
A. Unlike a female grizzly bear in the Rockies, which typically occupies a range of 50 to 300 square miles, a male’s range will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally as
B. Unlike the range of a female grizzly bear in the Rockies, typically occupying 50 to 300 square miles, a male will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally so
C. While the typical range of a female grizzly bear in the Rockies is 50 to 300 square miles, with males, their range can cover 200 to 500 square miles and occasionally so
D. Whereas a female grizzly bear in the Rockies typically occupies a range of 50 to 300 square miles, a male will cover 200 to 500 and occasionally as
E. The typical range of a female grizzly bear in the Rockies is 50 to 300 square miles, unlike males, which will cover 200 to 500 square miles and occasionally as