gmatprep2090
The ancient Iberians were mostly agrarian, but complementing their production of wheat and barley with raids and piracy.
A) but complementing
B) and had complemented
C) and even though they complemented
D) although they complemented
E) but with complementing
Meaning: The ancient Iberians were mostly farmers. They augmented their crop production with raids [on enemies to steal valuable items] and piracy.
Quote:
A) The ancient Iberians were mostly agrarian, but complementing their production of wheat and barley with raids and piracy.
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incomplete sentence: the words after COMMA + BUT must be an independent clause with a subject and working verb
Because there is a comma before
but, the second half of the sentence must be a full clause.
-- BUT is a coordinating conjunction (a FANBOY).
-- If a coordinating conjunction has a comma before it, and one side is an independent clause,
then
the other side must also be an independent clause.*-- The present participle (the verbING)
complementing is not a working verb.
Quote:
B) The ancient Iberians were mostly agrarian, and they had complemented their production of wheat and barley with raids and piracy.
• The second part of the sentence requires a subject,
they, because
and is preceded by a comma.
(See notes on option A.)
• The past perfect construction
had complemented is incorrect.
-- Past perfect should be used only when needed. It is constructed this way:
had/have + past participle-- Past perfect is called the "past of the past," used to show that one event happened before another.
-- Raiding and piracy did not happen before farming. The people farmed, raided, and conducted piracy at the same time.
Quote:
C) The ancient Iberians were mostly agrarian, and even though they complemented their production of wheat and barley with raids and piracy.
• The second half of the sentence is incomplete because the subordinating conjunction
even thoughis preceded by a COMMA + AND
• The following is not a complete sentence: Even though they complemented their production of X and Y with A and B.
Quote:
D) The ancient Iberians were mostly agrarian, although they complemented their production of wheat and barley with raids and piracy.
• Correct. Unlike Option C (
even though), another subordinating conjunction,
although, correctly is
not preceded by the word
and.
Subordinate clauses are not complete sentences and cannot be joined with COMMA +
AND.
Quote:
E) The ancient Iberians were mostly agrarian, but with complementing their production of wheat and barley with raids and piracy.
• "but with complementing" is a hot mess.
-- Just as in options A and B, the second half of the sentence is not an independent clause.
The second half lacks a subject,
they.
--
complementing is not a working verb
-- "with complementing" is nonsensical. We can have "by complementing" or "with complements OF,"
though those phrases would not fix the lack of a subject and working verb.
The correct answer is D.
*Note: if a coordinating conjunction is used with a dependent clause and an independent clause, no comma is used.
Correct: They wanted to travel to Europe but could not get away from work at the same time. [There is no subject in the second part of the sentence, so
"but they could not get away from work at the same time is not a full or independent clause." In such cases, no comma is used.]
This site explains coordinating conjunctions and their punctuation.