OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
Quote:
In addition to the great benefits humankind has enjoyed since the discovery of certain technologies, many atrocities would have been prevented
had the scientists who made the discoveries had the wisdom to discard such power.
A) had the scientists who made the discoveries had
B) if the scientists who made the discoveries
have hadC) if the scientists who made the discoveries
hadD) had the scientists who made the discoveries
haveE) had the scientists who made the discoveries
showed Type 3 conditionalsYou have seen inverted subjects and verbs before.
We are dealing with an inverted Type 3 conditional because the result clause uses
would have been avoided. (Those italicized words are described in different jargon-y ways. I use "perfect conditional.")
Type 3: IF past perfect, THEN perfect conditional.
IF this thing had happened, then THAT thing would have happened.
I grant you that the verb "had had" is positively wicked.
In options A, D, and E, the word IF has been deleted.
Reverse that process.
Change A, D, and E back into if-then statements:
(1) Reverse the order of the clauses:
→ A)
Had the scientists who made the discoveries had the wisdom to discard such power many atrocities would have been prevented.
(2) replace HAD or WERE with IF and put the helping and main verbs back together into one verb phrase (remember that the second
had means
possessed or
owned—had had = had possessed).
→ A) IF the scientists who made the discoveries had had the wisdom to discard []power, many atrocities would have been prevented.
Now the
if clause comes before the main clause and the grouped verbs (
had had) are in standard position.
Only option A follows the correct verb pattern for a Type 3 conditional in the IF clause: HAD + verbED (past participle)The other four options use present perfect (B), simple past (C) , and present (D) tenses.
Option E uses
had showed, which is not a correct verb tense of any kind.
The past participle of
show is
shown, not
showed. In Option E,
showed should be
shown.
Option A correctly produces a Type 3 conditional.
Type 3 conditionals involve the impossible (and unreal) past and the probable result in the past.
Type 3: If THIS thing had happened, then THAT thing would have happened. (But neither thing happened.)
-- IF past perfect (had + verbED), THEN perfect conditional (would + have + verbED)
--
If they had cooperated better, then they would have finished their project on time. (But they didn't cooperate, and they didn't finish on time.)
-- are statements about the unreal past and probable result (often statements of regret or missed opportunity)
-- involve a past condition that is unreal or impossible and its probable result, in the past, that is also unreal (the condition did not happen and the result did not happen)
The structure of Type 3 conditionals, one more time
→ the IF clause is rendered in the past perfect tense: HAD + past participle (verbED), and
→ the MAIN (result) clause is rendered in the perfect conditional tense: WOULD + HAVE + verbED
→ IF past perfect, THEN perfect conditional.
Inverted conditionals are real things that exist on the GMAT.
Not all conditional statements require an IF/THEN construction.
In fact, on the GMAT, you will rarely see “then.”
I give examples of two such official questions below.
A few more exist that I cannot remember off the top of my head.
Finally, inverted conditionals are fairly common in formal writing.
Memorize this part, or start reading a lot:
Exactly three words can stand in for IF in an inverted conditional, and GMAT doesn't test the third one (as far as I recall).
We can invert conditionals with the words
had, were, and
should.
Had I known about the concert, I would have bought tickets.If I had known about the concert, I would have bought tickets.
Were I president, I would wear a mask.
If I were president, I would wear a mask.
Should he not leave office peacefully, I will become an ex-pat. ← I don't recall having seen this form in any official GMAT questions
If he does not leave office peacefully, I will become an ex-pat.
This kind of
should does not connote obligation.
I would not worry about this "should." Let it go.
Were it healthy to eat chocolate truffles frequently, I would eat chocolate truffles a few times a day.(But it's not healthy to eat chocolate truffles frequently, and I don't eat chocolate truffles a few times a day.)
The three words that can replace IF must be used in certain ways.
HAD is used for past conditionals. (
Had I known you were sad, I would have called you.)
SHOULD is used for future conditionals. (
Should you need assistance, push the flight attendant button.)
WERE is used to talk about an imaginary or improbable future. (
Were he awake, we would hear him rummaging around.)
You will almost certainly not see the inverted "should" structure.
But you might face a inverted conditional that begins with HAD or WERE.
SPOILER alert. Beneath the spoilers are links to official questions whose answers will be very easy to figure out with this material fresh in mind.
In this official question the inverted hypothetical {"were it") is the correct answer.
HERE.In this official question,
were it not is in the non-underlined portion of the sentence.
HERE.• TAKEAWAYS-- only
were, had, and
should can stand in for IF in inverted conditionals
-- I do not recall an official question that used the "should" construction
-- you should know that the words
were and
had can imply “if” in inverted conditionals
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• Economist/Bloomberg.prep OE Answer choice A is the only grammatically correct one.
The conditional in this question begins with the result part (many atrocities would have been prevented) and continues with the condition part (had the scientists... power).
The result part is not underlined, so it must be correct.
The result clause is in Future Past Perfect (would have been), which indicates Conditional 3.
The condition part must be consistent with Conditional 3, that is, must be in Past Perfect, as is the case in this answer choice (had had).
In Conditional 3 sentences, "if" may be omitted, in which case the condition part begins with the word had (as it does in this and in some of the other answer choices).
Answer choice B is grammatically incorrect because the condition part is in Present Perfect (if... have had).
Answer C is also grammatically incorrect. The condition part is in Past Simple (if... had), which indicates Conditional 2, while the result part is in Future Past Perfect (would have been), indicating Conditional 3.
What is confusing about this answer choice is the use of the verb had in the condition part. Since had is also used in Conditional 3 sentences (only there it is followed by a verb in the third form - V3), it is easy to mistake the condition part for that of a Conditional 3.
Answer D is grammatically incorrect. The condition part should be consistent with Conditional 3, that is, must be in Past Perfect. The Past Perfect structure is had + V3. However, in this answer choice the verb
had is followed by a verb in base form (
have).
Finally answer choice E is also grammatically flawed.
In this answer choice the verb
had is followed by a verb in past form (
showed) in the condition clause.
The third form of the verb show is shown.
[In other words, showed should be shown.]Another way of identifying the grammatical incorrectness of this answer choice is the following: The verb showed is conjugated - it is in the past form (V2).
The first verb, and only the first verb, of a sentence must be conjugated. Since
showed is not the first verb (
had is), it shouldn't be conjugated
• COMMENTSI am glad to see some people I have not seen in awhile.
These answers range from good to very good. This question is very hard. Well done.