The decision to pull the US out from the Paris agreement by the president drew heavy criticism within the US and internationally, including China, which swiftly recommitted itself to the agreement forged with the previous administration.
A. The decision to pull the US out from the Paris agreement by the president drew heavy criticism within the US and internationally, including China,
I am correcting this option to replicate the original sentence. Here, "pull X out from Y" is incorrect - the correct usage is "pull X out of Y". It is preferable to have "the President" as close to "the decision" as possible. Also, "including China" is not parallel to "within the US...". Eliminate.B. The decision to pull the US out of the Paris agreement by the president drew heavy criticism within the US and internationally, including China,
It is preferable to have "the President" as close to "the decision" as possible. Also, "including China" is not parallel to "within US...". Eliminate.C. The decision by the president to pull the US out off the Paris agreement drew heavy criticism within the US and internationally, including China,
"pull X out off Y" is incorrect - the correct usage is "pull X out of Y". Eliminate.D. The president’s decision to pull the US out of the Paris agreement drew heavy criticism within the US and internationally, including China,
"including China" is not parallel to "within US...". Eliminate.E. The president’s decision to pull the US out of the Paris agreement drew heavy criticism within the US and internationally, including in China,
Correct answer - corrects earlier errors and no new errors are introduced.Hope this helps.