OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
In a report that turns conventional wisdom on its head,
it has been concluded by some of the world’s leading economists that the supposed rich people pay less overall amount in taxes than the relatively poorer ones do.
• Issue: supposed vs. supposedly→
supposed is an adjective that means
alleged or
questionably true. Adjectives modify only nouns.
See the definition and pronunciation of 1b,
here.
→
supposedly is an adverb that means
according to what is generally assumed or believed (often used to indicate that the speaker doubts the truth of the statement). See that definition
here.
An adverb modifies a verb, an adjective, another adverb, or a clause. Adverbs do not modify nouns.
→ The central issue in this question is the use of the adjective
supposed and the adverb
supposedly.
The sentence is not saying that the people are
supposed people—that construction is nonsensical.
(
Supposed must apply to
people rather than to
rich, because adjectives cannot modify adverbs.)
Rather, the sentence is saying that the people in question are supposedly rich.
We need the adverb
supposedly to modify the adjective
rich.
Supposedly must modify the adjective
rich because adverbs cannot modify nouns.
Adverbs can and often do modify adjectives:
a cautiously optimistic person; a reasonably early bedtime; a deeply generous gesture.
As I mentioned above, the reverse is not true. That is, adjectives cannot modify adverbs.
DinoPen , I hope that I have answered your question.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A)
it has been concluded by some of the world’s leading economists that the
supposed•
supposed should be
supposedly. The people are not "supposed." As I mentioned, the people in question are
supposedly rich.
• I'm not a huge fan of the passive construction in this sentence (
it has been concluded by some of the world's leading economists)
→ in this case, the "it is" clause is unnecessary and uses too many.
We use "it is" constructions when we want to deemphasize agency or to stress the end of a sentence.
Neither factor is at play here.
→ passive construction is not always wrong. Many correct answers use the passive voice.
Do not waste time making decisions about style until you have read all the options.
Diction, style, and rhetorical construction are much easier to decided when you compare options.
The first error is fatal.
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) some of the world’s leading economists have concluded that the supposedly
• I do not see any errors
→ supposedly is used correctly
→ the active voice
(some economists have concluded) works better than the passive voice in option A
KEEP
Quote:
C) some of the world’s leading economists have concluded that the
supposed• The adjective
supposed should be the adverb
supposedly. See option A.
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D)
it is being concluded by some of the world’s leading economists that the supposedly
• The phrase
it is being concluded by is cumbersome and unnecessarily long
→ Compare (D) to (B). Option D is muddled and not concise.
In addition, the verb phrase
is being concluded by is in the wrong tense: the economists are not concluding XYZ right this moment.
We use present progressive to describe a trend or a fleeting moment—but not whatever people already
have said.
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E) some of the world’s leading economists
having concluded that the supposedly
•
having concluded is not a working verb. In fact, in this option, no verb exists.
ELIMINATE E
The correct answer is B.COMMENTSIt's good to see everyone.
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