OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
If continued population growth
is unmatched by increases in food supply, large parts of the globe would face widespread hunger and famine.
• Meaning? If food supply does not keep pace with continued population growth, large parts of the world will grapple with widespread hunger and famine. (Or, welcome to Malthusian theory.)
• CONDITIONALS: If X, [then] Y
Conditionals contain an IF clause and a MAIN (then) clause.
(You will rarely see the word "then" used in conditional statements on the GMAT. Your cue is the word
if.)
Different types of conditional statements require different verb tenses in the
if and the
main clause.
See the footnote** for a
very condensed overview of the major types of conditionals.
In this case, we deal with a Type 1 conditional, which is a statement in the present made about the future and about real things.
A Type 1 conditional is often a prediction, as is the case here; the sentence describes a possible condition and its probable result in the future.
The verb tenses used in a Type 1 conditional are these:
→ IF simple present, THEN simple future
If THIS thing happens, THAT thing
will happen.
Some incorrect options use the wrong conditional type.
• DICTION -
not matched vs unmatchedDiction essentially refers to the use of correct words in the right ways.
Unmatched typically means unequaled, peerless, inimitable,
excellent.
Can "unmatched" mean "not matched"?
In a strict sense, yes—but in this context,
not matched is the better choice of words because
not matched conveys neutral, not positive, meaning.
Both [not]
matched and
unmatched are past participles (verbED words) that are coupled with the helping verb
is.
The two word choices might be facially similar, but in context they convey different things.
We learn diction by reading. I know of no other way.
Use diction to break ties but never to eliminate an option on the first pass.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) is
unmatched by increases in food supply, large parts of the globe
would • verb tense error
→ the main (result) clause should use
will, not
would → This sentence is a Type 1 conditional:
If X happens (simple present), Y will happen (simple future)
• DICTION
→
unmatched is dicey but not strictly wrong.
In this context,
not matched is superior to
unmatched because the former means what it says whereas the latter connotes
peerless, unequaled, rare and special—in short, a positive state of affairs
This issue is not a decision point in this option.
The verb error above is fatal.
I am flagging the diction issue to give you a sense of what might or ought to catch your eye.
ELIMINATE A
B) is not matched by increases in food supply, large parts of the globe will• I do not see any errors
• Verbs are correct:
IF X happens, Y
will happen•
not matched is a better word choice than
unmatched. See comments below the prompt and below option A.
KEEP
Quote:
C)
will not be matched by increases in food supply, large parts of the globe
would• verb tense error - no conditional type uses this verb tense pair
Wrong: If simple future, then present conditional.
Wrong: If this thing will happen, then that thing would happen.
ELIMINATE C
Quote:
D)
should be unmatched by increases in food supply, large parts of the globe
can• verb tense error
→ never use
should or
would in the IF clause (using those two words is often okay in the result/main clause)
→ we need future tense.
Can signals ability or possibility, not prediction.
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E)
were to be
unmatched by increases in food supply, large parts of the globe
[VERB?]• verb tense error / missing verb
The If . . . were . . . construction signals the use of a Type 2 conditional, which consists of a hypothetical condition and its probable result.
If simple past (used in the subjunctive sense), then present conditional (would).
Correct: If the leader were genuinely concerned about his constituents' health, especially that of children ineligible for vaccines, he would not ban mask mandates.
A Type 2 conditional often uses the construction IF WERE . . . THEN WOULD. Not always. See the footnote.
ELIMINATE
The answer is B.
COMMENTSBhu750 , welcome to SC Butler.
These answers are superb.
Very well done!
**VERY condensed summary of conditionals
Zero conditional: If THIS thing happens, THAT thing happens.
-- general truths
-- IF simple present, THEN simple present
-- situation is real and possible. True now and always.
Type 1: If THIS thing happens, THAT thing will happen
-- statements in the present made about the future and about real things
-- IF simple present, THEN simple future
-- condition is real, outcome ("truth") is very probable
Type 2: If THIS thing happened, then THAT thing would happen
-- If you left the house earlier, then you would be on time for the bus.
(But you did not leave the house earlier.)
Type 2: If THIS thing happened, then THAT thing would be happening.
-- If I understood the joke, I would be laughing. (But I don't understand the joke, so I am not laughing.)
Type 2: If THIS thing were to happen, then THAT thing would happen.
-- If antitrust laws were enforced properly, then oligopolies would not control entire sectors of the economy.
-- hypothetical (theoretical) statements NOT based on what is actual. Counterfactual, unreal, imaginary (hypothetical)
-- IF simple past, THEN present conditional (or present continuous conditional)
-- condition is not real. Time is always (now or at any time).
Type 3: If THIS thing had happened, then THAT thing would have happened. (But neither thing happened.)
-- IF past perfect, THEN perfect conditional (would + have + verbED)
-- If they had cooperated better, then they would have finished their project on time. (But they didn't cooperate, and they didn't finish on time.)
-- statements about the unreal past and probable result (often statements of regret or missed opportunity)
-- unreal past condition, probable result in the past that is also unreal (the result did not happen)
Mixed conditional: If THIS thing had happened, then THAT thing would happen
-- IF is in the past, THEN is in the present (present result of a past action)
-- If past perfect, THEN present conditional (just as in Type 2)
-- time is an event in the past, result is ongoing [affects the present]
-- If I had taken the Series 7, I would be a stockbroker. (But I didn't take the tests and I am not a stockbroker.)
(Mixed conditionals have many variations. I've just listed what seems to be the most common type.)