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A) less taxes than it otherwise would owe Inorrect

=> 'taxes'-->(plural/countable). Use of 'less' to denote countable noun is incorrect

B) less taxes than what they otherwise owe Incorrect

=> Using 'they' to modify 'a corporation' is incorrect.

C) less taxes than are otherwise owed incorrect

=> Per the meaning,a corporation owe. A corporation is a singular subject. What is the subject of verb 'are' ?
=> ...pay..and ..owed (not parallel)

D) less money in taxes than it would otherwise owe Correct

=> A corporation exploits loopholes..to pay less taxes than it otherwise would owe..('it' correctly modifies a corporation. And the parallelism is maintained between pay and owe)

E) less tax money than what is otherwise to be owed Incorrect

=> ...pay..and ..owed (not parallel)

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When a corporation exploits loopholes in financial regulations in order to pay less taxes than it otherwise would owe, the government is forced to find alternative sources of revenue to compensate for the shortfall.
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Subject - Verb - Modifier
      When a corporation exploits loopholes in financial regulations in order to pay less money in taxes than it would otherwise owe,
    the government is forced to find alternative sources of revenue to compensate for the shortfall.

Issues:
Both stand correct:
    Since retirement, Jonathan is paying FEWER taxes than earlier ----> Tax is a COUNTABLE noun.
    Since retirement, Jonathan is paying LESS tax than earlier -----> Tax is an UNCOUNTABLE noun.

Thus, sometimes, it's tricky to find the correct choice when the decision points are so close.

However, the term "taxes" is considered plural ----> Fewer makes better sense.
A, B and C modifier issue.

Answer choice analysis:
    A) less taxes than it otherwise would owe
      modifier issue. OUT!

    B) less taxes than what they otherwise owe
      modifier issue. OUT!

    C) less taxes than are otherwise owed
      modifier issue. OUT!

    D) less money in taxes than it would otherwise owe
      Better than the rest. D is the champ!

    E) less tax money than what is otherwise to be owed
      Highly colloquial usage: D is much more succinct and prefers to E. OUT!

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Both “pay less taxes” and “pay fewer taxes” are legitimate usages.

pay less taxes – pay a lower amount of taxes. If this year a corporation pays $80 in taxes, compared to $100 last year, then it will pay less taxes.

pay fewer taxes – pay fewer types of taxes, or a smaller number of taxes. Assume that last year a corporation had to pay an income tax, an estimated tax, a sales tax, a property tax, and an excise tax. If this year, it has been exempted from paying two of them because of the pandemic, then it will pay fewer taxes.

The intended meaning clearly calls for “less taxes” because a corporation would want to pay less money. Paying $100 in any number of taxes is surely better than paying $38 million only in federal income taxes. Trump can attest.

pay [some money] in taxes – is usually used when the amount of money is explicitly shown. For example: pay $450 in taxes, or pay millions in taxes. Just saying “pay less money in taxes” may seem redundant because saying “pay less taxes” already conveys this meaning. What else does a corporation pay taxes with? Kidneys?))

It’s no wonder that not a single issue of WSJ and FT uses “pay less money in taxes”. There is only one such usage in the whole history of The New York Times and The Economist. By contrast, “pay fewer/less taxes” is used very widely.

Although a rare/informal usage is hardly ever a valid reason for eliminating a choice, we’d better avoid saying “pay less money in taxes” in a b-school or especially during interviews.

The real difference between A and D is the placement of “otherwise”. When “otherwise” is used as an adverb modifying a verb, it is usually placed in between the helping verb and the main verb, as here , here and here .

In A, “would” talks about the hypothetical situation in which a corporation does NOT exploit loopholes. The non-underlined part of a similar official problem:

- Carnivorous mammals can endure what would otherwise be lethal levels of body heat.

yashikaaggarwal you eliminated A because of “would”, but found “would” in D correct. Are those “would”s different? I have difficulty noticing that difference.
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yashikaaggarwal you eliminated A because of “would”, but found “would” in D correct. Are those “would”s different? I have difficulty noticing that difference.
Would owe in A is direct conviction, that one has to pay on future date irrespective of any thing, but the statement meant the loopholes are been exploited in order to pay less money they would have to pay, if they don't find any loophole, the alternative of paying a large sum.
Would otherwise states the possibility, Hence i chose D
I didn't wronged A because of would but the conviction tone it follows, Which D is stating as benefit of doubt.
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Thank you for responding yashikaaggarwal

I don’t think that ‘it otherwise would owe’ and ‘it would otherwise owe’ differ that much in depicting a hypothetical situation. I actually think that they are essentially the same thing, except for the preferable placement of “otherwise” in the latter.

Had choice A been “will owe”, then your words that “one has to pay on future date irrespective of anything” would make sense. However, in that case the comparison wouldn’t work – we wouldn’t be comparing an actual case with a hypothetical one. You may want to take a look at Ron’s thoughts here. I find both pages of that thread very helpful.

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One might also argue that “owe” in D refers to “money”, whereas there is nothing to which “owe” in A can refer. So, it may seem that the presence of “money” in D is justified. However, note that “owe taxes” is also a legitimate, widespread, and formal usage. That said:

A) A corporation pays less taxes than it otherwise would owe taxes
D) A corporation pays less money in taxes than it otherwise would owe money
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Thank you for responding yashikaaggarwal

I don’t think that ‘it otherwise would owe’ and ‘it would otherwise owe’ differ that much in depicting a hypothetical situation. I actually think that they are essentially the same thing, except for the preferable placement of “otherwise” in the latter.

Had choice A been “will owe”, then your words that “one has to pay on future date irrespective of anything” would make sense. However, in that case the comparison wouldn’t work – we wouldn’t be comparing an actual case with a hypothetical one. You may want to take a look at Ron’s thoughts here. I find both pages of that thread very helpful.

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One might also argue that “owe” in D refers to “money”, whereas there is nothing to which “owe” in A can refer. So, it may seem that the presence of “money” in D is justified. However, note that “owe taxes” is also a legitimate, widespread, and formal usage. That said:

A) A corporation pays less taxes than it otherwise would owe taxes
D) A corporation pays less money in taxes than it otherwise would owe money
I have a long way to cover whole sentence correction portion of GMAT. I never said mine justification is perfect, but I do think otherwise placement does make a difference in overall statement. Anyways, thanks for suggestion.

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I think the real problem here is as follows - the non-underlined portions says “the government is forced to find alternative sources of revenue to compensate for the shortfall.” For the shortfall implies shortfall of money. Which none of the options talk about precisely except D and E but further in E money is modified as tax money which might be ok but construction is whacky. So IMO if we go literal about the meaning the much debated less/fewer for money/taxes can be avoided. With that BCE OPTIONS have other serious grammatical issues.

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I never say "less taxes." Neither, apparently, does she.
Thank you very much for the helpful link you provided. I think there is some confusion because the author actually says “less taxes”, as well as “fewer taxes”, and explains why she says so. I and she seem to use pretty much the same logic.

Because no official problem tests “taxes” in the same way as the current problem, I thought its usage is open to discussion. While doing research on the matter, I came across Ron Purewal’s comment that said - [yeah, some uncountable nouns are plural. for instance, "taxes" is a plural noun, but the concept that it represents is uncountable. so, you would say my taxes are less than they were last year.]

I also gleaned that the publications of such schools as Harvard Business School, Oxford’s Said Business School, and Wharton Business School all use “less/fewer taxes” and none uses “less money in taxes”. Browsing my CFA materials, I further made sure that “less/fewer taxes” is the way it’s used, not “less money in taxes”.

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JonShukhrat , I could pick dozens of examples of official sentences that you should not utter or write in B school or elsewhere.
Sure, you are right. SC is tough. However, I didn’t mean the whole SC section, but just “less money in taxes”. Just this phrase.

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The Times and the Economist? Both use like to introduce examples. What should we do with that fact?
GMAC does not use like in that way. Yet.
Yes, I agree with you. The New York Times and The Economist hardly are the most reliable sources. That’s why we’d better avoid “les money in taxes” because only those two (out of WSJ, FT, Bloomberg, and other sources I mentioned) happen to have used this phrase (just once in their entire history). This is just my opinion based on my small research.

I very much appreciate your opinion. I just happen to have my own distinct stance on the matter. That’s ok. The forum is meant for this - for discussion.

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yashikaaggarwal egmat , Experts

would you pls suggest more about compared entity out here and how same is valid in option D

What "less money in taxes" has been compared to ?

Also pls confirm whether a construction something as below would have been wrong out here ? Incase it is wrong then why ?
And incase this is correct then why appropriate comparison element has not been mentioned in answer options and same is correct without appropriate comparison element ?

"less money in taxes than what it would otherwise owe"
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When a corporation exploits loopholes in financial regulations in order to pay less taxes than it otherwise would owe, the government is forced to find alternative sources of revenue to compensate for the shortfall.


A) less taxes than it otherwise would owe
taxes are not countable so addimg less doesn't make any sense therefore out

B) less taxes than what they otherwise owe
IN addition to flaws in A they usage isn't right therefore out

C) less taxes than are otherwise owed
owed isn't the right tense along with the errors of A

D) less money in taxes than it would otherwise owe
money is a countable measure so perfect usage along with the meaning therefore let us hang on to it

E) less tax money than what is otherwise to be owed
Similar reasoning as A

THerefore IMO D
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