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While consumer groups have become alarmed over the high rates of interest on purchases made with certain credit cards, there has been
no significant decline in demanding or using them. eybrj2
A. no significant decline in demanding or using them.
Following are the errors in Option A -
i)
Pronoun Error: "them" is ambiguous. "them" can logically refer to "credit cards, high rates"
ii)
Idiom Error: "in demanding" is incorrectly used in this sentence. Would not rely on eliminating Option A only on this error. But since we also have Pronoun Ambiguity we can eliminate it safely.
Eliminate Option A.
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B. no significant decline in the demand for or use of such cards.
-> No pronoun ambiguity here since "them" is not used.
-> "demand for" is correctly parallel to "use of".
-> "in the demand" is used correctly in the sentence.
Let's keep Option B.
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C. neither a significant decline in the demand for, nor in the use of them.
Following are the errors in Option C -
i)
Parallelism Error:"neither" is followed by a noun "a significant" while "nor" is followed by a preposition "in".
ii)
Pronoun Error: Same as in Option A, "them" is ambiguous. "them" can logically refer to "credit cards, high rates"
iii)
Sentence Structure Error: The comma between "neither....nor" is incorrect.
Can get rid of Option C.
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D. a significant decline neither in demanding such cards, nor in the use of them.
Following are the errors in Option D -
i)
Meaning Error: Changes meaning. It says that "there has been a significant decline"
ii)
Pronoun Error: Same as in Option A & C, "them" is ambiguous. "them" can logically refer to "credit cards, high rates"
iii)
Sentence Structure Error: Same as in Option C, the comma between "neither....nor" is incorrect.
Let's get rid of Option D
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E. a significant decline neither in demanding or using such cards.
Following are the errors in Option E -
i)
Parallelism Error:"neither" is followed by a preposition "in demanding" while "or" is followed by a gerund "using"
ii)
Idiom Error: "neither X or Y" is incorrect. The correct conjunction is "neither X nor Y"
Lets get rid of Option E.
So Option B is our answer