MissBong
What is the role of "
with its centralized location for both collaboration and accountability" here?
Is it modifying the phrase "
benefits of a communal office environment" of just "
a communal office environment"?
I am unable to understand it.
PyjamaScientistFirst, thank you for your PM and the tag, I appreciate you trying to understand the non-underlined portion of the sentence. And I hope you are doing so after zeroing on
(D) as the right choice.
Second, I'd be lying if I said I am not
afraid of "with phrases" myself. That's the only structure that still gets me baffled at times as it has had a fair share of ambiguity around its usage in GMAT questions.
So, I am not sure if I am the best person to write on the topic. Because there is no one litmus test for "with phrases" as there is for "Like/As" or "That/Which" structures. So, now I try to see how the "with phrase" sits in my sentence and whether it helps to convey the meaning of the sentence more clearly/precisely than the other choices available (
this is the method suggested by legendary GMATNinja in one of his lecture videos on such tough-to-understand structures). But, I have tried to share my insight on "with phrase" structure as much as I can below, and I think
AndrewN /
sayantanc2k /
AjiteshArun can provide better clarity on the topic of "with phrases" and their modification.
My understanding of "with phrases" is as follows:
Modifies preceding action:With is a preposition. You use it to provide further information. For eg, I go to school
with my sister. Main sentence here is. "I go to school", "
with my sister", adds information on "with whom I go to school". So, "
with" is a preposition. But when accompanied with a
phrase, "
with phrase" becomes a "
Clause modifier". It tries to
expound on the action with which it is used. Example: I drew a painting of my dead dog,
with flowing strokes and teary eyes. Here, "
with flowing strokes and teary eyes" is a
"with phrase" describing
how I drew the painting of my dead dog. I remember, I read a post by
Magoosh's
Mikemcgarry, sharing his insight on "with + verb-ing phrase" structure on an
OG question. He wrote, "With phrases" do not add additional information/separate action. They just
further detail the main action with which they are kept in the sentence. So, basically, "with +verb-ing phrases" are clause modifiers, which means, they modify the main action (verb) and make sense with the doer of that action (adverbial modifiers if you like the
jargon).
Modifies preceding noun:But, we know prepositional phrases can also
modify nouns (adjectival modifiers, I think that's the
jargon lol). When any modifier modifies a noun/pronoun, it does not expound on the action/verb (or
how aspect of the action) associated with the noun/subject. Such as in the example, I drew a painting of my dead dog,
with flowing strokes and teary eyes,
with phrase expounded on the action of the previous clause and gave more information on "
how" I drew the painting. But, when the prepositional phrase modifies a noun, it neither expounds on the action nor
answers,
"How was that action done?". Example: "Bihar is India's poorest state,
with an annual per capita income of $111, lower than that of the most impoverished countries of the world" (link to this
OG question
is here). Here, the with phrase does not expound on "how" is Bihar India's poorest state. It infact modifies the preceding noun "India's poorest state = Bihar". To prove this, replacing "
with" with "
which has" gives, "India's poorest state,
which has an annual per capita income of $111." Now, there is no doubt that "which" here modifies "the poorest state", which in turn modifies "Bihar". So, you can try this "
with = which" trick and see if it makes sense with the
noun. But, do not apply it blindly as people do in the case of "
due to = caused by". It may/may not work always.
To take home the point, here is an excerpt from an
egmat article that shows how "with phrases" can modify both preceding nouns and preceding clauses. Link to this
OG question
is here:
Quote:
Starfish, with anywhere from five to eight arms, have a strong regenerative ability, and if one arm is lost it is quickly replaced, with the animal sometimes overcompensating and growing an extra one or two.
In this official sentence, the first "with" modifier modifies the preceding noun "Starfish" because the modifier presents additional information/physical description of the animal.
The second "with" modifier modifies the preceding action denoted by the phrase "is quickly replaced". The "with" modifier further describes what happens while the starfish replaces its lost arm. In the action of replacing the lost arm, the animal sometimes overcompensates and grows an extra arm.
So the second "with" modifier adds on to action of replacing of the lost arm by the starfish by explaining what happens sometimes during the process.
Takeaway: Since "with" modifiers are versatile as they can modify preceding action or preceding noun, the meaning of the sentence guides us as to what is the entity the "with" modifier is meant to modify. Hence, you should understand the meaning of the sentence and ensure that one of these roles fit well in the given sentence.
So, in my opinion, in the question at hand, the placement of "with phrase" is such that it modifies the noun "a communal office environment".
Quote:
"a growing sentiment among managers is that the benefits of a communal office environment, with its centralized location for both collaboration and accountability, are enough to justify the costs of brick-and-mortar office space."
"
With phrase" here is modifying the preceding
noun phrase "communal office environment" because the modifier presents description of a communal office environment. Also, the "
its" in the with phrase needs to refer to some noun, only logical antecedent to
its is
a communal office environment in my opinion. Through the sentence, you get the meaning that "a communal office environment provides a centralized location for both collaboration and accountability", and this information is set off by a pair of commas as removing this information won't distort the actual meaning of the sentence that is, "
Benefits of a communal office environment are enough to justify the costs of brick-and-mortar office space". So, "with phrase" here is also a non-essential modifier".
Hope it helps.
P.S: Please ignore any errors in the write up above. I returned from an excruciating field day and did my best to write a comprehensive article on "with phrase" modifiers to the best of my ability and I still know it's not the best you can get on that topic, so good luck fetching a response from the experts. But I have to say, in trying to help you, I too got my concepts cleared up a bit. And I think I am now less afraid of the "with phrases" than I was when I started to write this article, thus it proves the saying, "By helping others, you help yourself". So, thank you for thinking to ask.