Rickooreo wrote:
MartyTargetTestPrep KarishmaB EMPOWERgmatVerbal GMATNinja ExpertsGlobal5 mikemcgarryHi experts, I am facing issue with eliminating option, just because they are wordy. Can you please help me with some pointers to evaluate such error in SC
Take for instance this GMAT Advanced (official) SC
The spraying of pesticides can be carefully planned, but accidents,
weather conditions that could not be foreseen, and pilot errors often cause much larger deposits of spray than they had anticipated.
(B) weather conditions that cannot be foreseen, and pilot errors often cause much larger deposits of spray than
(D) weather conditions that are not foreseeable, and pilot errors often cause much larger deposits of spray than
D is wrong
Now look at this SC - Source
Manhattan PrepRecent studies have shown that the antioxidants found in the acai berry boost immune cell function more effectively than almost any other fruit, making it one of the healthiest widely available fruits on the market.
C. Recent studies have shown that the antioxidants found in the acai berry boost immune cell function more effectively than those in almost any other fruit, which makes the acai berry
one of the healthiest widely available fruitsD. Because the acai berry’s antioxidants boost immune cell function more effectively than those in almost any other fruit, it is
one of the healthiest fruits that is widely availableOA - D
While I agree, there are other errors, but why can't wordy come into play here
Your second example has nothing to do with wordy either. It is a meaning thing.
Cause - acai berry’s antioxidants boost immune cell function more effectively than those in almost any other fruit
Effect - açai berry is one of the healthiest fruits
The effect is not that açai berry is one of the healthiest and most widely available fruit. The effect is just that it is one of the healthiest fruit. The fact that it is widely available too is an additional characteristic of this fruit.
Also, when we write 'one of the healthiest widely available fruits,' I am not sure what it means.
I should either say 'one of the healthiest and most widely available fruits' if that is what I mean
or I should say 'one of the healthiest fruits among those that are widely available' if that is what I mean
or 'one of the healthiest fruits that is widely available' etc.
The meaning has to be clarified.
Hence option (D) is better.