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A study by the Ocean Wildlife Campaign urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population, which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing state waters for shark fishing during pupping season, and requiring commercial fishers to have federal shark permits.
(A) which includes the establishment of size limits for shark catches, closing
(B) which includes establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught, closing
(C) which include the establishment of size limits for shark catches, the closing of
(D) including establishing size limits for shark catches, closing
(E) including the establishing of limits to the size of sharks that are caught, the closing of
This question tests the concepts of Modifiers and Parallelism.
The intended meaning of the sentence is that a study urged states to undertake a number of remedies to reverse a decline in the shark population. The sentence then lists the remedies. The remedies are listed in the form of a modifier and since there is a list of remedies, there is also parallelism involved.
When we do a vertical scan of the options, we see that Options A, B, and C begin with the relative pronoun ‘which’ and Options D and E begin with the participle ‘including’.
A relative pronoun refers to the noun immediately before it, which in this case, would be “shark population”. Since ‘shark population’ cannot include the establishment of size limits for shark catches etc., the sentence doesn’t convey a logical meaning.
Further, parallelism is also affected in Options A and C. The last part of the sentence is a list of remedies – establishing…, closing…, and requiring…
In Options A and C, ‘establishing’ has been changed to ‘the establishment’.
So, Options A and C can be eliminated. In Option B, parallelism has been maintained but the phrase “establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught” changes the meaning. The limits are on the size of ‘shark catches’, meaning the number of sharks that can be caught, not on the size of the sharks that can be caught. So, Option B can also be eliminated.
Between Options D and E, E contains the same error as Option B. The phrase “establishing limits to the size of sharks that can be caught” has been used in this option too.
So, Option E can be eliminated.Therefore, Option D is the most appropriate one.Jayanthi Kumar.