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Almost like clones in their similarity to one another, the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease.


(A) the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease

(B) the cheetah species is especially vulnerable to disease because of its homogeneity

(C) the homogeneity of the cheetah species makes it especially vulnerable to disease

(D) homogeneity makes members of the cheetah species especially vulnerable to disease

(E) members of the cheetah species are especially vulnerable to disease because of their homogeneity


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The Cheetah Species

(A) Modifier (homogeneity)

(B) Modifier (species)

(C) Modifier (homogeneity)

(D) Modifier (homogeneity)

(E) CORRECT


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The underline starts shortly into the sentence and just after a comma. Different answer choices place a different noun after that comma (homogeneity, species, or members). This choice may be testing an opening modifier.

Issues

(1) Modifier: homogeneity; species

In fact, it is testing an opening modifier! The beginning portion (almost like clones in their similarity to one another) is describing some specific noun. What is it describing?

Logically, the opening modifier should be talking about some specific creatures who are very similar to one another. This noun should be the main noun after the opening modifier.

The main noun after the comma in answers (A), (C), and (D) is homogeneity, but homogeneity can’t be almost like clones in their similarity to one another. Eliminate these three choices.

Choice (B) is closer but still not quite right. The word species refers to the overall group. The opening modifier, however, refers to things that are almost like clones in their similarity to one another. The one another language indicates that the main noun should be the individual creatures in that group. Eliminate (B).

The Correct Answer

Correct answer (E) is the only one that fits the requirement: the individual members of the species are indeed the ones who are almost like clones because they are so similar to one another.

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Much of the action is in the non-underlined portion of this sentence: “Almost like clones in their similarity to one another...” That phrase includes the plural pronoun “their”, so it needs to be followed by a plural noun that could reasonably be described as “like clones” in terms of their similarity to each other.

With that in mind…

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(A) the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease

(A) definitely doesn’t work, because “the cheetah species’ homogeneity” is singular, and it’s unreasonable to say that the “homogeneity” is “almost like clones in their similarity to one another.”

So (A) is out.

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(B) the cheetah species is especially vulnerable to disease because of its homogeneity

The trouble here is that “the cheetah species” is singular, and once again, a singular species can’t logically be described as “almost like clones in their similarity to one another.” (And in case you’re wondering: yes, “species” can also be plural, but in this case, it’s followed by “is”, and then “its” refers back to “species” later in the sentence. So “species” is definitely singular in this particular sentence.)

We can eliminate (B), too.

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(C) the homogeneity of the cheetah species makes it especially vulnerable to disease

(C) repeats the exact same error as (A): “the homogeneity” is singular, and it’s still totally unreasonable to say that the “homogeneity” is “almost like clones in their similarity to one another.”

That takes care of (C).

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(D) homogeneity makes members of the cheetah species especially vulnerable to disease

(D) rearranges a few things, but the heart of the problem is still completely the same as in (A) and (C): “homogeneity” is singular, and it’s once again unreasonable to say that the “homogeneity” is “almost like clones in their similarity to one another.”

(D) is gone, and I really hope we like (E), or else we’ll be starting over…

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(E) members of the cheetah species are especially vulnerable to disease because of their homogeneity

Yup, this is fine! “Members” is plural, and it makes sense to say that “members of the cheetah species” are “almost like clones in their similarity to one another.”

“Their” also jumps out at me at the end of the sentence, and that’s fine, too: “their” refers to “members of the cheetah species.”

So (E) is our winner.
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i take E.
we have to compare clones to cheetahs and not the homogeneity.so C D are out. in A "cheetah species' homogeneity " doesnt sound good. also species is a collective noun and hence singular. in A the use of "them" defies this rule.

between B and E. see in the main sentence, clones are used as individual entities and not a group by using "one another". hence i think "members" is more apt in E
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Straight E.

C and D wrongly compare clones to homogeneity.
Between B and E, E is better since 'members of the cheetah species' is plural and 'one another' rightly does the comparison.
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Straight E

Its between B and E because of proper placement of word being modified.

Phrase "Almost like clones in their similarity to one another" suggested that this phrase should be modifying some plural subject. Thats why B is wrong.
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Almost like clones in their similarity to one another, the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease.

A. the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease
--> "homogeneity" is wrongly compared to "clones" . We can say that one clone is smiliar to another clone. However, can we say that a homogeneity is similar to another homogeneity? ---> It is obviously that "homogeneity" can't be compared with "clones" . Also, "them" has no specific antecedent.

One gramma point noted by Vivek123 long ago:
1. The taciturn personality of Joana makes her difficult to approach. --> in this case, "her" is understood to refer to "Joana"
In another case:
2. Joana's taciturn personality makes her difficult to approach --> "her" cannot be used to refer to "Joana"
==> for above reasons, A is out.

B. the cheetah species is especially vulnerable to disease because of its homogeneity
--> "its" has no specific antecedent, whether it's "species" or "disease" we don't know. --> B is out.

C. the homogeneity of the cheetah species makes it especially vulnerable to disease
---> "homogeneity" is wrongly compared with "clones"
--> C is out.

D. homogeneity makes members of the cheetah species especially vulnerable to disease
---> Same reason as in C. --> out

E. members of the cheetah species are especially vulnerable to disease because of their homogeneity --> correct.
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Almost like clones in their similarity to one another, the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease.

(A) the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease
Modifier error. It's not the cheetah species' homogeneity that is similar, it's the cheetah species.

(B) the cheetah speciesis especially vulnerable to disease because of its homogeneity
The modifier is correct but it runs into a second problem. The species can't be vulnerable to disease, the cheetahs themselves are vulnerable to the disease. This error is fixed in E.

(C) the homogeneity of the cheetah species makes it especially vulnerable to disease
Modifier error. It's not the cheetah species' homogeneity that is similar, it's the cheetah species.

(D) homogeneity makes members of the cheetah species especially vulnerable to disease
Modifier error. It's not the cheetah species' homogeneity that is similar, it's the cheetah species.

(E) members of the cheetah species are especially vulnerable to disease because of their homogeneity
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The modification error clearly removes three choices namely A, C and D. It is not the homogeneity that is like clones but the members of the Cheetah species.
B is out for reasons of subject – pronoun number disagreement by using their for the singular species.E is the final survivor
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Almost like clones in their similarity to one another, the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease.


we have "their" in dependent clause so in the independent clause we would need PLURAL subject.

(A) the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease
homogineity is singular. and wrong subject.

(B) the cheetah species is especially vulnerable to disease because of its homogeneity

(C) the homogeneity of the cheetah species makes it especially vulnerable to disease

(D) homogeneity makes members of the cheetah species especially vulnerable to disease

(E) members of the cheetah species are especially vulnerable to disease because of their homogeneity
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Almost like clones in their similarity to one another, the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease.

(A) the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease - Illogical modification - homogeneity cannot be like clones ; do not have an antecedent for “them”
(B) the cheetah species is especially vulnerable to disease because of its homogeneity - “Like” illogically compares “the cheetah species” with clones. The cheetah species is not like clones; it’s the members that are like clones ; “species” is singular here, there is no antecedent for “their”.
(C) the homogeneity of the cheetah species makes it especially vulnerable to disease - “Like” illogically compares “homogeneity” with clones ; No antecedent for “their”.
(D) homogeneity makes members of the cheetah species especially vulnerable to disease - “Like” illogically compares “homogeneity” with clones
(E) members of the cheetah species are especially vulnerable to disease because of their homogeneity- Correct

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Almost like clones in their similarity to one another, the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease.

(A) the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease -misplaced modifier
(B) the cheetah species is especially vulnerable to disease because of its homogeneity -species is singular, thus "their" can't refer to species
(C) the homogeneity of the cheetah species makes it especially vulnerable to disease -misplaced modifier
(D) homogeneity makes members of the cheetah species especially vulnerable to disease -misplaced modifier
(E) members of the cheetah species are especially vulnerable to disease because of their homogeneity - Correct. Plural their goes hand in hand with members
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Almost like clones in their similarity to one another, the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease.

(A) the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease
"Them" intends to refer to "the cheetah species", but it is not found in (A). (A)'s main subject is species's "homogeneity".

(B) the cheetah species is especially vulnerable to disease because of its homogeneity
"Almost like clones in their similarity to one another"

(C) the homogeneity of the cheetah species makes it especially vulnerable to disease
"it" wrongly refer to "the homogeneity. Homogeneity does not make homogeneity vulnerable.

(D) homogeneity makes members of the cheetah species especially vulnerable to disease
"Almost like clones in their similarity to one another" is not modifying "homogeneity".

(E) members of the cheetah species are especially vulnerable to disease because of their homogeneity

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The comparison should be between clones and cheetah. So, eliminate options: A,C,D (comparison of clones with homogeneity is wrong) and option B ("is" is wrong because its singular)
(A)the cheetah species’ homogeneity makes them especially vulnerable to disease
(B) the cheetah species is especially vulnerable to disease because of its homogeneity
(C) the homogeneity of the cheetah species makes it especially vulnerable to disease
(D) homogeneity makes members of the cheetah species especially vulnerable to disease
(E) members of the cheetah species are especially vulnerable to disease because of their homogeneity
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The comparison should be between clones and cheetah. So, eliminate options: A,C,D (comparison of clones with homogeneity is wrong) and option B ("is" is wrong because its singular)



Hello shilpibansal,

Congratulations on solving this official sentence correct. You have done a neat job in quickly solving this problem correctly. Keep up the good work. :thumbup:

I would just like to say that from your analysis of Choice B, it appears that you think that species is a plural noun and hence use of single is incorrect.

Please note that word species is considered singular when it has been used in connection of one entity.

Since this official sentence talks about cheetah species, the word species is singular.

Choice B is incorrect because like other choice, this choice also presents illogical comparison between clones (individual units) and cheetah species.


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Can easily pick E by considering S-V agreement. Only E has a plural subject, which matches 'their'.
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Can easily pick E by considering S-V agreement. Only E has a plural subject, which matches 'their'.




Hello megakee9,

Your reason is absolutely sound to reject all answer choices and select Choice E as the correct answer for this official sentence.

However, the basis on which you have made this selection is not S-V agreement as there is no Verb engaged in your logical analysis.

Their is a plural pronoun that must agree in number with its noun antecedent that it refers to. So you made your selection on the basis of Pronoun- Antecedent number agreement.


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shilpibansal wrote:
The comparison should be between clones and cheetah. So, eliminate options: A,C,D (comparison of clones with homogeneity is wrong) and option B ("is" is wrong because its singular)



Hello shilpibansal,

Congratulations on solving this official sentence correct. You have done a neat job in quickly solving this problem correctly. Keep up the good work. :thumbup:

I would just like to say that from your analysis of Choice B, it appears that you think that species is a plural noun and hence use of single is incorrect.

Please note that word species is considered singular when it has been used in connection of one entity.

Since this official sentence talks about cheetah species, the word species is singular.

Choice B is incorrect because like other choice, this choice also presents illogical comparison between clones (individual units) and cheetah species.


Hope this helps. :-)
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I'm not able to grasp completely what do you mean by "Please note that word species is considered singular when it has been used in connection of one entity."
Please elaborate that for me. Thank you.
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I'm not able to grasp completely what do you mean by "Please note that word species is considered singular when it has been used in connection of one entity."
Please elaborate that for me. Thank you.





Hello chandra004,

Thank you for the query. :-)

The word species in general is a singular noun.

When used as many species or in a context when the word has been used for more than one living being, then it acts as a plural.

Long story short, species can be used as both singular and plural noun. The usage will depend on the context of the sentence.


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Much of the action is in the non-underlined portion of this sentence: “Almost like clones in their similarity to one another...” That phrase includes the plural pronoun “their”, so it needs to be followed by a plural noun that could reasonably be described as “like clones” in terms of their similarity to each other.

With that in mind…


Hi GMATNinja,
I haven't completely grasped the point of your explanation.
why it need to be followed by a plural noun, just because of "their" in the non-underlined portion?
first, i think "their" refers to "clones"
second, i don't thinks plural noun need follow because i read a sentence from MANHATTAN SC guidance:
UNLKIE her parents, she has green eyes --her parents is plural noun, she is singular,

Many posts discussed in this forum point out that it need to be followed by a plural noun because of their, but i havenot gotten. Please help,

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Much of the action is in the non-underlined portion of this sentence: “Almost like clones in their similarity to one another...” That phrase includes the plural pronoun “their”, so it needs to be followed by a plural noun that could reasonably be described as “like clones” in terms of their similarity to each other.

With that in mind…


Hi GMATNinja,
I haven't completely grasped the point of your explanation.
why it need to be followed by a plural noun, just because of "their" in the non-underlined portion?
first, i think "their" refers to "clones"
second, i don't thinks plural noun need follow because i read a sentence from MANHATTAN SC guidance:
UNLKIE her parents, she has green eyes --her parents is plural noun, she is singular,

Many posts discussed in this forum point out that it need to be followed by a plural noun because of their, but i havenot gotten. Please help,

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Good question! Let's start with the example you encountered: "Unlike her parents, she has green eyes." Notice that when we see the possessive pronoun "her," we haven't come across a referent (the noun the pronoun refers to) yet. Because "her" is singular, we know that the referent, once it appears, will be singular. So it makes perfect sense that the subject is "she," right?

Imagine that we change the beginning of the sentence to "Unlike their parents..." Now the pronoun, "their" is plural, so our expectation is that the coming referent will be plural. Consequently, we might see something like, "Unlike their parents, the Smith girls have little interest in money laundering." Our plural pronoun, "their," refers to the subsequent plural subject, "the Smith girls." The point is that in each instance it's the pronoun that dictates what type of noun will come next.

Back to the original construction: “Almost like clones in their similarity to one another...”

This is similar to our second example above. Just as "Unlike their parents," is setting up the expectation for a plural noun to come, "Almost like clones in their similarity," is doing the exact same thing. And just as "their" doesn't refer to "parents" in the first case - it refers to whomever we're comparing the parents to - "their" doesn't refer to "clones" in the second case, but rather to a plural noun that is being compared to clones later in the sentence.

I hope that helps!
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