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Although many video games are situated in fantasy worlds quite unlike our own, others feature human characters that embark on careers, get married, have their own children, just as real people do.
Meaning: Although many video games are based on fictional concept, other video games are based on real world concepts in which the characters, like real people, embark on careers, get married, and have children of their own.
Errors:
1) who should be used for human characters instead of that
2) embark on careers, get married, have their own children is the list of things the characters in the video games do....it should be correctly written with "and" between 2nd and 3rd activity: embark on careers, get married, and have their own children
3) modifier "just as real people do" is incorrectly placed and incorrectly worded. correct modifier should be "just like real people" and should be placed near human characters.
Answer: E
I disagree with your explanation for choosing E. Just as real people do is absolutely correct and a recurring sentence structure in many GMAT questions. 'As' can be used with noun+verb which converts it into a noun phrase and can very well fit at the end of the sentence. Your explanation shows that you judged this option by how it sounded which is not the best approach.
I need expert inputs on use of that and who here. Who is used to refer to people, not fictional characters. When we say human characters, we mean fictional beings, not humans. Then why is A incorrect? Can someone explain this?