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Thank you. I have every intention of explaining my shortcomings frankly and honestly.

My question wasn't very clear (my fault). What I'm really asking is how to use/format the optional essay when addressing multiple red flags. I've read that some people blend their topics together (if they're related enough), or they might have headers that address each issue separately (like "1.) Employment Gap" ?)

I don't know if there's an unspoken etiquette or adcom preference in the way an applicant goes about using the OE, and I want to make sure I know my options when planning what/how to write.


Hello again charles01


Ok regarding structuring your essay, I understood you have only two of them, red flags, that you mention, low gpa/poor grades in math classes and employment gap.

You mention also, that due to your future GMAT score you would possibly only address employment gap in optional essay.


However, if we start with two red flags agenda, that are still only two topics, or two problems, meaning in terms of style, that will be two only bigger paragraphs.

So I dont see any special need for structuring, you can start with either one, usually that would be historically first one, that makes sense, I assume low grades first, then you continue to employment gap in next paragraph.

If you can connect the two even better, that will look as one integral essay, but either way, even with two subtitles it will still be fine.


Also, I know you want to write this in advance and you definitely should, even only as template, but during application process, when you come to uploading your optional essay, you may be provided with some guidance in terms of style and number of characters you should use, so you may end up fine tuning your initial essay/template.


Those demands can also a little bit vary from school to school, from department to department, so be prepared for that, if show up to be necessary.


You may end up lucky with no need to adapt.


Take your application list, visit those schools websites and investigate further in those and other terms.



Good Luck ! :cool: