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(A) Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process. Other than the continuous list of A and B and C , no other errors are directly presented.

(B) The reason the post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerably risk is because of spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies. - The reason process presents a considerably risk is because - redundancy and considerable risk , we need adjective considerable and not adverb considerably

(C) A considerable risk is presented during the post-heart transplant recovery process, where internal bleeding is spontaneous and the formation of blood clots and malignancies. - risk is presented in the process, where? what is where referring to? it should refer to location or position of subject.

(D) The post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerable risk due to the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding, and blood clots and malignancies are formed. - due to the fact - redundant. process presents risk because x, and y and z are formed. process presents risk or process is risky since x and y and z are formed?

(E) Spontaneous internal bleeding, along with the formation of blood clots and malignancies, are what make the post-heart transplant recovery process risky.
all are equally risky, internal bleeding is not meant to be associated with the formation of blood clots and malignancies, hence along with is not needed.

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Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process.

(A) Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process.

(B) The reason the post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerably risk is because of spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.

(C) A considerable risk is presented during the post-heart transplant recovery process, where internal bleeding is spontaneous and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.

(D) The post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerable risk due to the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding, and blood clots and malignancies are formed.

(E) Spontaneous internal bleeding, along with the formation of blood clots and malignancies, are what make the post-heart transplant recovery process risky.


 


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A-- correct, no worries.
B-- moves the structure of sentence, ang by moving subject, makes the sentence illogical and ungrammatical, incorrect.
C--use of "where" is wrong in sentence.
D--"due to the fact" makes the sentence unnecessarily wordy, incorrect.
E-- spontaneous internal..... is singular but this option use "are" and makes the sentence incorrect.

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A) Correct meaning. Bleedilng and formation are the two risks occurring during post-heart transplant recovery process.
B) Incorrect. Post-heart transplant recovery process itself doesn't act as a risk
C) Incorrect. The relative clause "where..." lacks of a verb for the subject "the formation"
D) Incorrect. After "due to the fact of" we need noun or noun phrase. "blood clots and malignancies are formed" is not a noun phrase.
E) Incorrect. "Along with" doesn't form a plural noun=>"are" is incorrect.
The answer is A
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(A) Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process.

Option A provides a clear and concise sentence that effectively conveys the intended meaning. It uses a straightforward subject-verb construction. Hence, correct option

(B) The reason the post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerably risk is because of spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.
This option introduces unnecessary phrasing and wordiness. It also uses "considerably risk" instead of the correct "considerable risk."

(C) A considerable risk is presented during the post-heart transplant recovery process, where internal bleeding is spontaneous and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.
This option changes the original sentence's structure and leads to a less clear and concise sentence.

(D) The post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerable risk due to the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding, and blood clots and malignancies are formed.
Option D introduces an awkward construction with "due to the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding" and lacks parallelism between "due to the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding" and "blood clots and malignancies are formed."

(E) Spontaneous internal bleeding, along with the formation of blood clots and malignancies, are what make the post-heart transplant recovery process risky.
Option E changes the verb to "are" to match the plural subjects, but the correct form should be "is" to match the singular subject "spontaneous internal bleeding." Also, it unnecessarily adds extra phrasing and wordiness.

Option A
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I have used elimination in this question.

B specifies internal bleeding and clotting as the specific reasons for risk.

C the sentence is not complete.

D it conveys that blood clot is formed due to internal bleeding

E it does not give equal weightage to both reasons..

So my choice is A

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Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process.

(A) Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process.

(B) The reason the post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerably risk is because of spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.

(C) A considerable risk is presented during the post-heart transplant recovery process, where internal bleeding is spontaneous and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.

(D) The post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerable risk due to the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding, and blood clots and malignancies are formed.

(E) Spontaneous internal bleeding, along with the formation of blood clots and malignancies, are what make the post-heart transplant recovery process risky.


 


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The concept being checked here is usage of 2 Ands in series vs "A along-with B' and 'are' . the answer is E.
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A) Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process.- correct

(B) The reason the post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerably risk is because of spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.— use of adverb considerably does not make sense

(C) A considerable risk is presented during the post-heart transplant recovery process, where internal bleeding is spontaneous and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.- where presents incorrect usage

(D) The post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerable risk due to the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding, and blood clots and malignancies are formed. - wordy and incorrect usage of due to

(E) Spontaneous internal bleeding, along with the formation of blood clots and malignancies, are what make the post-heart transplant recovery process risky.- use of are to refer to singular subject is wrong

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Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process.

(A) Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process.

(B) The reason the post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerably risk is because of spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.

(C) A considerable risk is presented during the post-heart transplant recovery process, where internal bleeding is spontaneous and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.

(D) The post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerable risk due to the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding, and blood clots and malignancies are formed.

(E) Spontaneous internal bleeding, along with the formation of blood clots and malignancies, are what make the post-heart transplant recovery process risky.


 


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A - incorrect as risks are not capable of causing risks. Wrong meaning.
B- is because of - correct structure & meaning
C- Modifier issue - where incorrect
D- due to the fact - incorrect structure
E- subject verb issue - are.

Therefore, option B is the correct answer.

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