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GMAT 1: 730 Q48 V42
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26 Jul 2023, 09:48
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Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process.
(A) Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process. - CORRECT
(B) The reason the post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerably risk is because of spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies. - Redundant: "the reason" and "because" mean the same thing
(C) A considerable risk is presented during the post-heart transplant recovery process, where internal bleeding is spontaneous and the formation of blood clots and malignancies. - where is used to refer a place; wherein would have been a better choice
(D) The post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerable risk due to the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding, and blood clots and malignancies are formed. - "fact of" is incorrect; it should have been "fact that"
(E) Spontaneous internal bleeding, along with the formation of blood clots and malignancies, are what make the post-heart transplant recovery process risky. - when using along with, we need to match the first subject (internal bleeding = singular) with the rest of the sentence; use of "are" with a singular subject is incorrect
(A) Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process. - CORRECT
(B) The reason the post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerably risk is because of spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies. - Redundant: "the reason" and "because" mean the same thing
(C) A considerable risk is presented during the post-heart transplant recovery process, where internal bleeding is spontaneous and the formation of blood clots and malignancies. - where is used to refer a place; wherein would have been a better choice
(D) The post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerable risk due to the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding, and blood clots and malignancies are formed. - "fact of" is incorrect; it should have been "fact that"
(E) Spontaneous internal bleeding, along with the formation of blood clots and malignancies, are what make the post-heart transplant recovery process risky. - when using along with, we need to match the first subject (internal bleeding = singular) with the rest of the sentence; use of "are" with a singular subject is incorrect
26 Jul 2023, 10:09
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(A) Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process.: Correct, no grammatical errors.
(B) The reason the post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerably risk is because of spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.: Incorrect, a considerably risk is not correct.
(C) A considerable risk is presented during the post-heart transplant recovery process, where internal bleeding is spontaneous and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.: Incorrect, where is wrong choice of modifier here.
(D) The post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerable risk due to the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding, and blood clots and malignancies are formed.: Incorrect, due to the fact of is not idiomatic.
(E) Spontaneous internal bleeding, along with the formation of blood clots and malignancies, are what make the post-heart transplant recovery process risky.: Incorrect, comma not required before are, also S-V agreement error.
IMO A.
(B) The reason the post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerably risk is because of spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.: Incorrect, a considerably risk is not correct.
(C) A considerable risk is presented during the post-heart transplant recovery process, where internal bleeding is spontaneous and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.: Incorrect, where is wrong choice of modifier here.
(D) The post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerable risk due to the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding, and blood clots and malignancies are formed.: Incorrect, due to the fact of is not idiomatic.
(E) Spontaneous internal bleeding, along with the formation of blood clots and malignancies, are what make the post-heart transplant recovery process risky.: Incorrect, comma not required before are, also S-V agreement error.
IMO A.
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26 Jul 2023, 10:11
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Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process.
(A) Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process.
Correct. The two noun phrases 'Spontaneous internal bleeding' and 'the formation of blood clots and malignancies' are parallel and use of plural verb 'present' is correct.
(B) The reason the post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerably risk is because of spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.
Incorrect. The usage 'The reason ......is because ' is redundant and incorrect.
(C) A considerable risk is presented during the post-heart transplant recovery process, where internal bleeding is spontaneous and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.
Incorrect. The noun phrase 'the formation of blood clots and malignancies' lacks a verb and so this choice is incorrect.
(D) The post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerable risk due to the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding, and blood clots and malignancies are formed.
Incorrect. The items in list 'the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding', and blood clots and malignancies are formed' are not parallel. Also 'due to' is incorrectly used. 'Because' is preferred to follow a clause.
(E) Spontaneous internal bleeding, along with the formation of blood clots and malignancies, are what make the post-heart transplant recovery process risky.
Incorrect. Plural 'are' is incorrectly used to refer to singular 'Spontaneous internal bleeding' .
(A) Spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies present considerable risk during the post-heart transplant recovery process.
Correct. The two noun phrases 'Spontaneous internal bleeding' and 'the formation of blood clots and malignancies' are parallel and use of plural verb 'present' is correct.
(B) The reason the post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerably risk is because of spontaneous internal bleeding and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.
Incorrect. The usage 'The reason ......is because ' is redundant and incorrect.
(C) A considerable risk is presented during the post-heart transplant recovery process, where internal bleeding is spontaneous and the formation of blood clots and malignancies.
Incorrect. The noun phrase 'the formation of blood clots and malignancies' lacks a verb and so this choice is incorrect.
(D) The post-heart transplant recovery process presents a considerable risk due to the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding, and blood clots and malignancies are formed.
Incorrect. The items in list 'the fact of spontaneous internal bleeding', and blood clots and malignancies are formed' are not parallel. Also 'due to' is incorrectly used. 'Because' is preferred to follow a clause.
(E) Spontaneous internal bleeding, along with the formation of blood clots and malignancies, are what make the post-heart transplant recovery process risky.
Incorrect. Plural 'are' is incorrectly used to refer to singular 'Spontaneous internal bleeding' .
