Re: Ask Precision Essay
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19 Apr 2011, 06:07
Precision Counts
At 1:05 AM on Mar 15th, I gave in…to the pressure that had been building up over last two years of my MBA application journey.
I had tears in my eyes. And the feelings of…relief…joy…excitement… all flashed on my face. Luckily, I had my wife just by my side to celebrate the good news the email brought - I had just got admitted to a Top-20 MBA program…
And before I could settle down, in just 12 more hours, I got another such email, from another top B-school…Admitted - it too said!
Now, I had applied last year too. And had failed miserably, with NO interview call, let alone an admit.
And this year??? Five interview calls, with two admits and two waitlists, all at top places. (Oh, and did I say, both the admits have scholarships too!)
I credit Jon Frank and Raj Patil – heavily – for this drastic shift in my performance.
I found their contribution priceless, in two broad ways that made this shift possible.
First: In the profile evaluation stage itself, Jon revealed to me, that my choice of schools was well…not right. With his suggestions, I realigned my school portfolio, and focused my energies on the ones where I had the best chance. This definitely helped in getting my two admits.
Second: Essay edits – this is truly Jon’s and Raj’s forte. I mean, these guys are AMAZING in editing essays…trust me! For example, my Goals Essay this year was so sharp, I almost feel embarrassed when I read my last year’s essay. And this was a result of Jon’s inputs.
He would question every key thought in an essay and challenge me to refine it further. And even though I had signed up for two rounds of edits, he would not stop giving the essays just one more read, each time, before they became…perfect.
I also loved their promptness! They would turn around the essays in no time, especially if I was hard-pressed for a deadline – and without sacrificing the work-quality. And since they have gone through the drill themselves, their inputs on Leadership and other ‘story’ essays are just so…sensible!
Jon and Raj: It was great working with you guys! I’ve told this to you many times, wont hurt if I say once more - Thank you. You guys rock.
To the MBA applicants, I would say, take the help of experts. It’s worth it. In my own case, I would have saved one year, had I taken help last year itself!
And guys, if you are considering working with Jon and Raj…go for it! They are good!