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This sentence can be easily solved if we look at the not underlined part.

Because the Earth's crust is more solid there (where?) and thus better able to transmit shock waves, an earthquake of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West.

Because the first part introduces a "place" using "where", the part after the comma must complete this construct.
Only D and E remains.

(D) in the eastern United States will typically devastate an area 100 times greater than will a quake of comparable magnitude occurring in the West
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(E) that occurs in the eastern United States will typically devastate 100 times more area than if it occurred with comparable magnitude in the West
"100 times more area" is wrong, and this option is wordy and unclear compared to D.

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Because the Earth's crust is more solid there and thus better able to transmit shock waves, an earthquake of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West.

(A) of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West -> after than expecting " in the west"

(B) of a given magnitude will typically devastate 100 times the area if it occurs in the eastern United States instead of the West meaning changed ; there is no comparision with the degree of devastation. rather simpley saying one area will be devasted 100 number of times

(C) will typically devastate 100 times the area in the eastern United States than one of comparable magnitude occurring in the West same issue as B

(D) in the eastern United States will typically devastate an area 100 times greater than will a quake of comparable magnitude occurring in the West

(E) that occurs in the eastern United States will typically devastate 100 times more area than if it occurred with comparable magnitude in the West the size is increased not the degree


Just a quick note: As we not talking about any particular area rather Areas in general usage of THE AREA is wrong ( B,C commit this error)
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This sentence can be easily solved if we look at the not underlined part.

Because the Earth's crust is more solid there (where?) and thus better able to transmit shock waves, an earthquake of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West.

Because the first part introduces a "place" using "where", the part after the comma must complete this construct.
Only D and E remains.

(D) in the eastern United States will typically devastate an area 100 times greater than will a quake of comparable magnitude occurring in the West
CORRECT
(E) that occurs in the eastern United States will typically devastate 100 times more area than if it occurred with comparable magnitude in the West
"100 times more area" is wrong, and this option is wordy and unclear compared to D.

Let me know if this helps



kudos to you. awesome explanation, completely forgot about the "where"
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I picked A because subject is earthquake, so verb devastates fits in.
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Pretty tough question !!!
Please find my reasoning below.

If anything is wrong,please feel free to advise :-)

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Because the Earth's crust is more solid there and thus better able to transmit shock waves, an earthquake of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West.


(A) of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West
INCORRECT... "IT" is problematic.It is not the same earthquake that devastates an area in both the East and the West.

(B) of a given magnitude will typically devastate 100 times the area if it occurs in the eastern United States instead of the West
INCORRECT... same as (A)

(C) will typically devastate 100 times the area in the eastern United States than one of comparable magnitude occurring in the West
INCORRECT... change in meaning.The intended meaning is to show that a quake devastates the area in eastern United States more severly than a quake of comparable magnitude does in the West.

(D) in the eastern United States will typically devastate an area 100 times greater than will a quake of comparable magnitude occurring in the West
CORRECT

(E) that occurs in the eastern United States will typically devastate 100 times more area than if it occurred with comparable magnitude in the West
INCORRECT... same as (A)
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Bumping. Good question!!

As per the meaning, we are comparing earthquakes in the Eastern and Western part.

Because the Earth's crust is more solid there and thus better able to transmit shock waves, an earthquake of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West.

(A) of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West
(B) of a given magnitude will typically devastate 100 times the area if it occurs in the eastern United States instead of the West : Comparison of Eastern earthquake with western part itself.
(C) will typically devastate 100 times the area in the eastern United States than one of comparable magnitude occurring in the West What is One referring to? Quake or Area? Not clear. Hence, incorrect
(D) in the eastern United States will typically devastate an area 100 times greater than will a quake of comparable magnitude occurring in the West: Correct comparison. Correct answer
(E) that occurs in the eastern United States will typically devastate 100 times more area than if it occurred with comparable magnitude in the West
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Because the Earth's crust is more solid there and thus better able to transmit shock waves, an earthquake of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West.

The subtle clue is in the use of the pronoun 'it'. An earthquake in the east… that if it occurred in the west means that the very same quake in the east will have to relocate to the west to cause the damage. That is not what the passage wants to say. It is talking of quakes of comparable strength in two different geographies. That is the reason we can instantly dump choices A, B, and E.


(A) of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West -- 'it' is wrong as explained above

(B) of a given magnitude will typically devastate 100 times the area if it occurs in the eastern United States instead of the West -- same as A; in addition, there is slip - up in the prepositional parallelism. It should be 'in the west" rather than simply 'the west'

(C) will typically devastate 100 times the area in the eastern United States than one of comparable magnitude occurring in the West- because we comparing an action namely devastate, we must match the verb in the first arm with a matching verb in the second arm, lest the comparison turns out between a devastation and an earthquake

(D) in the eastern United States will typically devastate an area 100 times greater than will a quake of comparable magnitude occurring in the West -- This is the best choice with proper comparison and prepositional parallelism and no pronoun error

(E) that occurs in the eastern United States will typically devastate 100 times more area than if it occurred with comparable magnitude in the West-- same pronoun problem of it. The sentence is also wrong as per the construct of the second conditional. You can't use a simple future in the main clause
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sometimes, the best way to choose the right option is to read through all options quickly. Nevertheless, this method will expose test takers to higher risks of missing important details.
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Because the Earth's crust is more solid there and thus better able to transmit shock waves, an earthquake of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West.

(A) of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West

(B) of a given magnitude will typically devastate 100 times the area if it occurs in the eastern United States instead of the West

(C) will typically devastate 100 times the area in the eastern United States than one of the comparable magnitude occurring in the West

(D) in the eastern United States will typically devastate an area 100 times greater than will a quake of comparable magnitude occurring in the West

(E) that occurs in the eastern United States will typically devastate 100 times more area than if it occurred with comparable magnitude in the West

GMATNinjaTwo Why A is incorrect? I selected A because it states a general fact and we need present tense to state a general fact.

Could you help to explain the "will" clause in (D)?
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Because the Earth's crust is more solid there and thus better able to transmit shock waves, an earthquake of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West.

(A) of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West

(B) of a given magnitude will typically devastate 100 times the area if it occurs in the eastern United States instead of the West

(C) will typically devastate 100 times the area in the eastern United States than one of the comparable magnitude occurring in the West

(D) in the eastern United States will typically devastate an area 100 times greater than will a quake of comparable magnitude occurring in the West

(E) that occurs in the eastern United States will typically devastate 100 times more area than if it occurred with comparable magnitude in the West

GMATNinjaTwo Why A is incorrect? I selected A because it states a general fact and we need present tense to state a general fact.

Could you help to explain the "will" clause in (D)?


Hey Hazelnut,

I'm no expert but here's my take on this question.

1) The sequence of events in the subordinate clause 'because....waves' states a general fact , so it logically, for me at least, requires us to the use the future tense as we are not sure if the earthquake's damage in the east vs. the west is a general fact.
2) The subordinate clause is describing the qualities of a particular place, so we should ideally be comparing what will happen in one area Vs. what will happen in the other area.
3) 'It' - This pronoun is basically referring to the earthquake that occurs in the East. Now the 'same' earthquake cannot occur in the west. We can have a 'similar' earthquake, or as the sentence puts it, an earthquake of a similar magnitude. If we were talking about the 'same' earthquake, we would need a hypothetical construction in the answer choices, in my opinion.

The construction in D is similar to - Because the Pizza is good at the diner, People will form a queue to eat that pizza.

If any experts have an opinion, please do share :)
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Because the Earth's crust is more solid there and thus better able to transmit shock waves, an earthquake of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West.

(A) of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West

(B) of a given magnitude will typically devastate 100 times the area if it occurs in the eastern United States instead of the West

(C) will typically devastate 100 times the area in the eastern United States than one of the comparable magnitude occurring in the West

(D) in the eastern United States will typically devastate an area 100 times greater than will a quake of comparable magnitude occurring in the West

(E) that occurs in the eastern United States will typically devastate 100 times more area than if it occurred with comparable magnitude in the West

GMATNinjaTwo Why A is incorrect? I selected A because it states a general fact and we need present tense to state a general fact.

Could you help to explain the "will" clause in (D)?


Option A has a meaning problem - option A implies that ANY earthquake (originated anywhere on the face of earth) would devastate 100x area in eastern US and x area in the west (i.e. one earthquake causing devastation to both areas). This does not make sense.

However option D correctly conveys that an earthquake in eastern US would cause devastation in 100x area, while an earthquake of same magnitude in western US would cause devastation in x area. (2 different earthquakes in two different regions are referred to.)
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(C) will typically devastate 100 times the area in the eastern United States than one of the comparable magnitude occurring in the West

(D) in the eastern United States will typically devastate an area 100 times greater than will a quake of comparable magnitude occurring in the West

if you are using the comparative degree comparison using the marker 'than', then you have to use a comparative adjective such as greater, more, fewer, lesser or less.

example: an area 100 times greater than, ten times larger than etc.
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'Than' cannot be used for an expression like '100 times the area … than'.

Therefore, C is wrong and D correct.
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I got the right answer D by eliminating choices B,C, & E for using phrase "devastate 100 times the area".
As per the question stem, we are comparing degree of devastation in a particular area "devastate an area 100 times".

Please guide me whether my reasoning is correct.
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Because the Earth’s crust is more solid there and thus better able to transmit shock waves, an earthquake of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West.
(A) of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West
it gives a impression that same quake will occur in the west also
(B) of a given magnitude will typically devastate 100 times the area if it occurs in the eastern United States instead of the West
same problem as above
(C) will typically devastate 100 times the area in the eastern United States than one of the comparable magnitude occurring in the West
an area 100 times greater...is better than 100 times the area
(D) in the eastern United States will typically devastate an area 100 times greater than will a quake of comparable magnitude occurring in the West
correct
(E) that occurs in the eastern United States will typically devastate 100 times more area than if it occurred with comparable magnitude in the Wests
same problem as A,B



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can you please tell me why 100 times the area is incorrect as in C ? I had picked as it looked concise to me :|
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Because the Earth's crust is more solid there and thus better able to transmit shock waves, an earthquake of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West.

(A) of a given magnitude typically devastates an area 100 times greater in the eastern United States than it does in the West
(B) of a given magnitude will typically devastate 100 times the area if it occurs in the eastern United States instead of the West
(C) will typically devastate 100 times the area in the eastern United States than one of comparable magnitude occurring in the West
(D) in the eastern United States will typically devastate an area 100 times greater than will a quake of comparable magnitude occurring in the West
(E) that occurs in the eastern United States will typically devastate 100 times more area than if it occurred with comparable magnitude in the West



I understand the OA, but I have one silly doubt. Please bear with me: In option D 'earthquake....devastate an area', shouldn't it be 'devastates'?
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I understand the OA, but I have one silly doubt. Please bear with me: In option D 'earthquake....devastate an area', shouldn't it be 'devastates'?

Hi ShashwatPrakash, this is something that you need to be comfortable with:

In future tense, we always use a plural form of the verb, irrespective of whether the subject is singular or plural.

D is in future tense: earthquake....will devastate...

Hence, despite a singular subject (earthquake), we use the plural verb devastate.

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ShashwatPrakash wrote:
I understand the OA, but I have one silly doubt. Please bear with me: In option D 'earthquake....devastate an area', shouldn't it be 'devastates'?

Hi ShashwatPrakash, this is something that you need to be comfortable with:

In future tense, we always use a plural form of the verb, irrespective of whether the subject is singular or plural.

D is in future tense: earthquake....will devastate...

Hence, despite a singular subject (earthquake), we use the plural verb devastate.

p.s. Our book EducationAisle Sentence Correction Nirvana has a note on this property. Have attached the corresponding section of the book, for your reference.



Thanks a lot Ashish for the quick reply. I made a note of the point.
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