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Bengal - born writer, philosopher, and educator Rabindranath Tagore had the greatest admiration for Mohandas K. Gandhi the person and also as a politician, but Tagore had been skeptical of Gandhi's form of nationalism and his conservative opinions about India's cultural traditions


A. same
B. for Mohandas K.Gandhi as a person and as a politician, but Tagore was also
C. for Mohandas K.Gandhi not only as a person and as a politician, but Tagore was also
D. of Mohandas K.Gandhi as a person and as also a politician, but Tagore was
E. of Mohandas K.Gandhi not only as a person and as a politician, but Tagore had also been


Source OG 13 # 38

A "And also" is redundant.
B Correct.
C "Not only... but also" construction is needed here.
D "And also" is redundant.
E "Not only... but also" construction is needed here.
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The 2 events of Rabindranath Tagore having admiration and being skeptical are concurrent and hence past progressive tense cannot be used. Rather Simple past tense should be used.
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D and E are out as they used incorrect of which tells Tagore had greatest admirations of MK Gandhi - Out
C is out as Not only X, But also Y is incorrectly used.
A has no parallel structure
B has parallel structure.
Ans is B
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I'm sorry, I know all of the other choices are wrong but I cannot understand the usage of " also" in choice B
but TAGORE was "also"... is strange for me... we don't have any thing before to intend the meaning of " also"
there is contrast not similarity
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I'm sorry, I know all of the other choices are wrong but I cannot understand the usage of " also" in choice B
but TAGORE was "also"... is strange for me... we don't have any thing before to intend the meaning of " also"
there is contrast not similarity


Bengal - born writer, philosopher, and educator Rabindranath Tagore had the greatest admiration for Mohandas K. Gandhi the person and also as a politician, but Tagore had been skeptical of Gandhi's form of nationalism and his conservative opinions about India's cultural traditions

A. for Mohandas K. Gandhi the person and also as a politician, but Tagore had been
B. for Mohandas K.Gandhi as a person and as a politician, but Tagore was also
C. for Mohandas K.Gandhi not only as a person and as a politician, but Tagore was also
D. of Mohandas K.Gandhi as a person and as also a politician, but Tagore was
E. of Mohandas K.Gandhi not only as a person and as a politician, but Tagore had also been


see soodia => here u can see "AND" { Mohandas K. Gandhi the person and also as a politician}

Now in parallelism using "and" => what is written after end => as a as a politician (NOUN)
so same should come before => as a person

as a person AND as a politician is a parallel structure.

Therefore ans is B

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soodia wrote:
I cannot understand the usage of " also" in choice B
but TAGORE was "also"... is strange for me... we don't have any thing before to intend the meaning of " also"
there is contrast not similarity

Hi soodia, it's possible that you are confusing also with not only but also. The latter is used to emphasize similarity.

also has no such mandate to be used only for similarity. For example, following would be correct:

Peter admired Jane for her skills, but also envied her.

However, following would be incorrect:

Not only did Peter admire Jane for her skills, but also envied her.

Another officially correct example of this nature that comes to mind:

The systematic clearing of forests in the United States created farmland (especially in the Northeast) and gave consumers relatively inexpensive houses and furniture, but it also caused erosion and very quickly deforested whole regions.

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Thank you for your consideration
but in both of your examples, the subjects are the same.
Peter admired Jane for her skills, but (he) also envied her.
and in second example " The systematic clearing of forests in the United States" in the subject.

but in our example S1 is Benegal and S2 is Tagore
I'm confused about using "also" when we compare their view. one of the admire Gandi and another has a skeptical view of him....
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soodia wrote:
Thank you for your consideration
but in both of your examples, the subjects are the same.
Peter admired Jane for her skills, but (he) also envied her.
and in second example " The systematic clearing of forests in the United States" in the subject.

but in our example S1 is Benegal and S2 is Tagore
I'm confused about using "also" when we compare their view. one of the admire Gandi and another has a skeptical view of him....



You can also read option B as
B) for Mohandas K.Gandhi as a person and Mohandas K.Gandhi as a politician, but Tagore was also

to clear your doubt i think this is a clear way MK GANDHI as a person and as a politician,
,but is showing contrast that he ( Tagore) was also skeptical....
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soodia wrote:
but in both of your examples, the subjects are the same.

but in our example S1 is Benegal and S2 is Tagore

Hi soodia, in your example as well, S1 and S2 are same.

S1 is actually Tagore (and not Bengal).
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Bengal - born writer, philosopher, and educator Rabindranath Tagore had the greatest admiration for Mohandas K. Gandhi the person and also as a politician, but Tagore had been skeptical of Gandhi's form of nationalism and his conservative opinions about India's cultural traditions


A. for Mohandas K. Gandhi the person and also as a politician, but Tagore had been
- "the person and also as a politician" is not only NOT //, but this changes the meaning...makes it sound like the person and politician are 2 different people

B. for Mohandas K.Gandhi as a person and as a politician, but Tagore was also
- Correct // structure "as a person" AND "as a politician"

C. for Mohandas K.Gandhi not only as a person and as a politician, but Tagore was also
- "not only" should be paired with "but also"

D. of Mohandas K.Gandhi as a person and as also a politician, but Tagore was
- "admiration of" = INCORRECT IDIOM. Should be: "admiration for"

E. of Mohandas K.Gandhi not only as a person and as a politician, but Tagore had also been
- Same as "D"

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soodia wrote:
but in both of your examples, the subjects are the same.

but in our example S1 is Benegal and S2 is Tagore

Hi soodia, in your example as well, S1 and S2 are same.

S1 is actually Tagore (and not Bengal).




wow, such a shame :( I was blind! I was extremely confused because of that!
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Bengal - born writer, philosopher, and educator Rabindranath Tagore had the greatest admiration for Mohandas K. Gandhi the person and also as a politician, but Tagore had been skeptical of Gandhi's form of nationalism and his conservative opinions about India's cultural traditions


A. for Mohandas K. Gandhi the person and also as a politician, but Tagore had been - usage of past perfect had been is incorrect
B. for Mohandas K.Gandhi as a person and as a politician, but Tagore was also - Correct
C. for Mohandas K.Gandhi not only as a person and as a politician, but Tagore was also - not only…and is unidiomatic
D. of Mohandas K.Gandhi as a person and as also a politician, but Tagore was - use of “admiration of” is incorrect ; the use of “also” after ‘and’ creates redundancy
E. of Mohandas K.Gandhi not only as a person and as a politician, but Tagore had also been - use of “admiration of” is incorrect ; not only…and is unidiomatic ; usage of past perfect had been is incorrect


Answer B
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Bengal - born writer, philosopher, and educator Rabindranath Tagore had the greatest admiration for Mohandas K. Gandhi the person and also as a politician, but Tagore had been skeptical of Gandhi's form of nationalism and his conservative opinions about India's cultural traditions


A. for Mohandas K. Gandhi the person and also as a politician, but Tagore had been - usage of past perfect had been is incorrect
B. for Mohandas K.Gandhi as a person and as a politician, but Tagore was also - Correct
C. for Mohandas K.Gandhi not only as a person and as a politician, but Tagore was also - not only…and is unidiomatic
D. of Mohandas K.Gandhi as a person and as also a politician, but Tagore was - use of “admiration of” is incorrect ; the use of “also” after ‘and’ creates redundancy
E. of Mohandas K.Gandhi not only as a person and as a politician, but Tagore had also been - use of “admiration of” is incorrect ; not only…and is unidiomatic ; usage of past perfect had been is incorrect


Answer B



Hello Skywalker18,

You have presented a good analysis of this official sentence. Keep up the good job. :-)

I would just like to add some thoughts with regards to the usage of the idiom not only X but also Y in Choice C and E.

According to you, these choices use the incorrect idiom not only X and Y. But if you pay attention, these choice use but also.

IMHO, use of not only X but also Y is not feasible in the context of this sentence because this sentence intends to present a contrast - one positive emotion and one negative emotion.

The idiom not only X but only Y is used to present two information about the same entity that are in the same direction. So, even if this sentence would have used the idiom not only X but also Y correctly, this idiom would not have conveyed the intended contrast.


Hope this helps. :-)
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B is the right answer.

D and E can be eliminated as they distort the meaning. So does Option A

Left with B and C- Idiom error, Hence B- worded correctly.

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Bengal - born writer, philosopher, and educator Rabindranath Tagore had the greatest admiration for Mohandas K. Gandhi the person and also as a politician, but Tagore had been skeptical of Gandhi's form of nationalism and his conservative opinions about India's cultural traditions


A. for Mohandas K. Gandhi the person and also as a politician, but Tagore had been
B. for Mohandas K.Gandhi as a person and as a politician, but Tagore was also - correct
C. for Mohandas K.Gandhi not only as a person and as a politician, but Tagore was also - incorrect not only -but also construction
D. of Mohandas K.Gandhi as a person and as also a politician, but Tagore was
E. of Mohandas K.Gandhi not only as a person and as a politician, but Tagore had also been - incorrect not only -but also construction
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