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What is OA

I thnk C should be answer . And presence actually relates to different clause and in C it is clear
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By the time he returned, the northern regions of his county had become unsafe; so he traveled south and started hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate them.

A) so he traveled south, and started hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate them.

B) so he started traveling south, hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it.

C) and he traveled south, hired land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it.

D) and he started traveling south, hired land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it.

E) so he traveled south and started hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it.


My POE:
A) THEM is incorrect
B) STARTED should be the action of the second action. Meaning is also changed since second clause beginning with HIRING now modifies the preceding clause
C) Same as B. 2nd clause is now modifying the first clause "he traveled south"
D) Same as D
E) Correct

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By the time he returned, the northern regions of his county had become unsafe; so he traveled south and started hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate them.

A) so he traveled south, and started hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate them. --> plural pronoun "them" can't referred to singular noun "land"

B) so he started traveling south, hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it. --> meaning change

C) and he traveled south, hired land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it. --> ";" is present, no need of "and"

D) and he started traveling south, hired land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it. --> same as C

E) so he traveled south and started hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it. --> correct
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By the time he returned, the northern regions of his county had become unsafe; so he traveled south and started hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate them.
This statement shows a cause and effect relationship. The statement can be said as "By the time he returned, the northern regions had become unsafe; so he traveled south and started hiring land around present day Vlaardigen in orider to cultivate it"

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A) so he traveled south, and started hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate them.
Land is singular and them cannot be used to refer Land. ELIMINATED
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B) so he started traveling south, hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it.
This changes the intended meaning by using present tense. It gives an impression that he started traveling north and simultaneously started hiring land. This is not the intended meaning. ELIMINATED.
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C) and he traveled south, hired land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it.
Cause and effect relationship is not maintained by the usage of "and" at the start. ELIMINATED
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D) and he started traveling south, hired land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it.
Repeats the same error as in C. ELIMINATED.

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E) so he traveled south and started hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it.
This choice conveys the intended meaning and refers to land with "it". This is the best choice.

OPTION: E
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By the time he returned, the northern regions of his county had become unsafe; so he traveled south and started hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate them.

A) so he traveled south, and started hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate them.
Subject verb error

B) so he started traveling south, hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it.
Changes meaning. This means that he started hiring land because he was travelling south.

C) and he traveled south, hired land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it.
Two sentences connected by a comma - Incorrect. Also, "and after ;"

D) and he started traveling south, hired land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it.
Two sentences connected by a comma - Incorrect. Also, "and after ;"

E) so he traveled south and started hiring land around present day Vlaardingen in order to cultivate it.
Correct meaning and grammar.
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