Hi guys,
I'm applying for round2 and I need some advice on my essays.
I'm not sure what strengths to elaborate in each essay question. I have strong community involvement, however, I will be writing this in the "how have you been involved in the community" essay question and I do NOT want to repeat this in my accomplishments essay (main essay), although it is one of my main accomplishments.
The way I see it, each accomplishment gets 200-words max in the first essay and it won't do justice for my community involvement portion of the application.
Instead, I've chosen to use 3 of the following accomplishments:
1) a proprietary product I built at work
2) proof my leadership and initiative at work
3) my undergraduate experience which includes a summer where I first became involved in this non profit organization along with while taking up leadership positions in several organizations, playing soccer for the college team, leading a tutor program and graduating with very good grades.
There already is an "undergraduate experience" essay, but I rather use my 400-words to talk about the community involvement instead. I'm a little concerned with using my undergraduate experience in my accomplishments since I've been working for four years now and I know this essay is generally used by applicants who have limited work experience.
Would this be the right approach?
Any feedback/suggestions will be greatly appreciated. Thanks!