Hi everyone, can someone please review my profile. I have written few points on Why Me. I won’t necessarily put everything. But also, want expert opinion on what points seem impressive. I would really appreciate any help here. Thanks in advance
Acads: Undergraduate: 9.37 CGPA, 12th - 93.4%, 10th - 10 CGPA, B.Tech from VIT Vellore (Rank ~13 in top colleges India)
Why me?
- Being the second engineer of the Travel team at CRED, I got an opportunity to work on Hotel Booking Business from 0-1, we spent more than a year, building product from scratch and I worked closely with the product building my product knowledge
- My PM: “Paritosh showcases exceptional solutioning skills, considering not only technical aspects but also customer experience, operational efficiency, and industry context. He has a unique ability to make well-informed trade-off decisions, which allows him to balance competing priorities and deliver optimal outcomes. This holistic approach to problem-solving makes him an invaluable asset to our team”
- "Google vs CRED" - It was one of the hardest decisions for me. After two years of working at Cisco Appdynamics, one of the top 10 technological companies in the world, I knew I wanted to create a larger impact and wanted to go somewhere where my contribution is much larger. Hence, despite having my dream to work at Google in front of me, I chose to work at CRED.
- I bring experience working at India’s one of the best startups, where I built a travel section in CRED app from scratch which is used by 4M people so far, with 50k users using it daily.
- On the day of launch, seeing 198k users use the app that I gave my 1 year in making, I felt proud and it was one of the best moments in my life.
- I bring learnings from product, technology, customer research etc
- I have always worked on building a holistic personality and have so diverse experiences. I tend to leave impact wherever I go
- At AppDynamics, my team was the winner of the global hackathon where we built a chat bot that helped bring teams together at a time when people were working remotely due to Covid.
- I was selected as a Team4Tech and TeachUnited volunteer (a global 10 person team), where I worked to solve some of Tanzania’s root level education system problem. In the process, we were given leadership training that helped me learn so much. I got to interact with teachers from Tanzania, and students to understand their problems, and develop solutions for them. This taught me leadership, problem solving, design thinking and communication
- In college, I was in the core committee of Dramatics club. Along with being an actor, which gave me confidence in expressing myself, I was the event manager for Khalbali fest at Riviera’ where 13 colleges participated.
- In college I was in the Google Developers Group where I was the event organiser and coordinator for multiple fests which included 400+ participants. I shifted the focus of the club to hackathons, and created a culture where students were inspired and participated more in hackathons and we organized more as well.
- I have always loved hackathons, and have won various awards and prizes at multiple levels by building products that helped solve major problems. I have won an award at IIT Madras, won gold medal for KPIT Sparkle, 2nd prize at Honeywell hackathon to name a few.
- Being an NCC cadet at school, taught me the value of discipline early on. I have also been consistent with fitness activities for more than 8 years. Have represented my school in state level tournaments for both Table Tennis and Volleyball. I go to the gym regularly and also do long distance running.
- I am curious person and loves to learn, to understand about product better, I joined Stoa, which is an alt MBA program and teaches about business fundamentals
- I am a part of Toastmasters international (Gurgaon) too.
I really appreciate if you have read so far. I feel that I have a lot of things on my profile but I feel I lack the depth or extreme level achievements, for ex. state level champion of xyz etc. This also makes me feel a bit less confident. I wanted some thoughts on how good is my profile and what should I focus more on.
I haven’t given GMAT yet. I will give it in 23 days. Rigth now I am getting a score of 690 on my mocks. I hope to get atleast 720/730 in my actual exam