OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONProject SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC2)
THE PROMPTQuote:
China’s views of stem cell treatment, which do not place as much significance on the moral value of the zygote, differ largely from the United States, which views the zygote as a representation of human life.
• Strip the sentence. Those "which" phrases are easy to remove.
→
China's views of stem cell treatment . . . differ largely from the United States.• In order to be logical, a comparison must compare two similar things.
In this case, the views of China should be compared with the views of the United States.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
A) the United States
• Incorrectly compares
views with
the United States [the U.S. is a country and is certainly not "views"]
ELIMINATE A
Quote:
B) that of the United States
• wrong pronoun
→ the singular pronoun
that cannot refer to the plural subject
the viewsELIMINATE B
Quote:
C) that embraced by the United States
• wrong pronoun
→ the singular pronoun
that cannot refer to the plural subject
the viewsQuote:
D) those from the United States
• not parallel/not idiomatic
→
views OF China and
views FROM the United States are not parallel.
Using different prepositions is correct
if the prepositions should be different.
Correct:
Soldiers on land receive training different from sailors at sea.In this case, the nonunderlined portion commits us to
views OF China and thus views OF each country. ==
→ views
from the United States is not idiomatic in this context.
ELIMINATE D
Quote:
E) those of the United States
• bingo
→ those = views
If you are in doubt, always substitute the pronoun with the noun.
Substitute the noun
views for pronoun
those, this way:
China’s views of stem cell treatment, which do not place as much significance on the moral value of the zygote, differ largely from the views of the United States, which views the zygote as a representation of human life.→ That sentence is grammatical and logical. The pronoun
those is correct.
The answer is E.NOTESJust in case you are not quite sure:
those is the plural form of
that.Both
those and
that can be "regular" pronouns that refer to an antecedent noun, as is the case in this sentence.
Just make sure that a noun
is mentioned, unless the sentence discusses people, in which case "those" can be a standalone pronoun.
→
those can occasionally stand alone when it means
those people who do XYZ→ I do not recall an official question in which
that was a standalone pronoun, though I would not rule out the possibility.
In a recent official question,
this both (1) was a standalone pronoun and (2) was allowed to stand for an entire idea described by the previous clause.
Still, I highly doubt that you will see
that as a standalone pronoun.
Both
those and
that can also be "determiner" or "demonstrative" pronouns that "demonstrate" or "point to" a noun:
→
that menacing cloud on the horizon,
those puffy clouds on the horizon
COMMENTSI am glad to see everyone persevering.
In these strange times (which cannot last forever), perseverance can be difficult.
Good for you for "showing up."
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