Dragongirl24
I am planning to apply for MBA for Fall 2023. Please review my profile and help me know my chances at CBS.
Demographic: Indian, Female, Age 27
Education: Bachelor of Engineering, Instrumentation (Mumbai University, 2016)
CGPA: 8.14/10
GMAT attempt1: 540, Attempt 2 is in July
Work Ex: Started as graduate engineer trainee in a process automation Swiss MNC and moved upwards to work in Sales as Sr. proposal engineer with 5 years work ex.
Worked with oil and gas public sector companies ( IOCL, ONGC, HRRL) and won huge project orders of up to 50 million INR
Worked with various chemical industry giants (Grasim, NFASL, GACL) and grabbed the biggest orders even won in company history
Won an international award for "Best Sales progress" which was also the first win for the Indian office.
ECs: Mentored kids in Mentor me India for 2 years
Part of Feeding India team for Mumbai
Part of Emergency Rescue team of office
Led to 2 student led organizations in college
Post MBA goal: Short term MBB Consulting (Operations), Long term: COO of a fortune 500 company
Motivation: Since I have worked in sales and worked with numerous clients, I am aware of how processes work. I would like to work in helping and consulting firms in improving their processes and improve their profitability and efficiency.
Posted from my mobile deviceFirstly let me assure you are not the only student giving their
GMAT again and again in hopes to score more.
Moreover, it showcases your passion for the course and your
dedication to score better to increase your admission chances.
Coming to your GMAT, a
540 score on GMAT is
pretty low, this only makes you eligible to
tier 3 schools.
As you mentioned you are attempting to take the GMAT again in July I would recommend you to wait till August and give your GMAT then.
Until then practice and practice , the
GMAT requirement of Columbia is currently 729. You must at least aim to score 700
Your
GPA is pretty decent. I see you have a range of
extracurricular skills, so make sure to include them in your
SOP.
Also mention your volunteering, it will definitely add value to your application.
Coming to your
work experience, it looks pretty decent. Mention your roles and responsibilities at your organisation.
What value did you add to your organisation and how you are a valuable member.
This will ultimately add
value to your application.
You need to showcase that you are a valuable applicant to the adcomms, and how you can benefit from their MBA program.
You mentioned your post-MBA goals, explain in your SOP how Columbia's MBA program will benefit you in achieving your future goals.
All in all, I would say you are an eligible candidate just need to
work on your GMAT and having a
strong application.
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