asker4ik13 wrote:
Hey, everyone
Would appreciate some feedback. Thank you in advance.
- Russian, white, straight, male, 30 y.o., married
- 730 GMAT (Q49, V40)
- 110 Toefl
- Undergraduate degree in engineering (automobile industry). The best automobile industry university in Russia.
- Former professional athlete, volleyball player. Was a member of Junior National Team Russia. Participated in Universiade 2007 in Bangkok as a member of national team. Europe champion among students and MVP of this championship. Played for a professional team in one of the strongest leagues in the world.
My other work experience includes creating 2 successful cosmetics stores in Moscow (active), creating an online cosmetics store(active) and creating a store and a hair salon in one place (unique approach in that town, now sold). I am also a partner in a big (55 stores) cosmetics stores network in Moscow. Got my first salary when was 13 and since then I am working constantly.
- Extracurriculars include volleyball non-profit projects. Participated in development of the amateur volleyball league. Gave volleyball lessons to kids and orphans.
- Goal: Creative marketing position in fashion & beauty industry.
- Speak 3 languages apart from my native Russian
- Hobby - Fashion photography. Just returned from Hong Kong where we were shooting models outdoors.
My main weakness is my very low GPA. It is as low as 2.44 (but I will check it once more. I pray for a calculating mistake). At the time I studied in university I was playing for the club and for the national team. I chose engineering while my sports colleagues all chose sports universities. And I also had some issues preventing me from getting top marks. However I worked hard on my diploma project and was awarded a prize as my project got into TOP100 diplomas that year. Will definitely write an optional essay for that.
Overall you have a good profile. Between your Russian background, your entrepreneurial success, and your pro sports past life you will definitely be able to paint a stand-out picture. Will it be enough to cover for that terrible GPA? Hard to predict really. But yes, there's enough there that you should try for it, and if you can write some essay explaining why, as you suggested, it will help out.
Anything you can do by the way to make a convincing argument that Columbia is the place for you (well, NY and luxury good should fit together), will help.
Otherwise, for your overall strategy, since you have a very unique and impressive profile, but a bad GPA, your best best is to apply for MORE schools, that way you don't have to dilute the level of the schools, but you would also hedge a bit against that GPA, which might harm your application.
I hope this helps!
Best,
JF