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Re: Factories can mass-produce beautiful glass vessels that are valued [#permalink]
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The Idiom is incorrect as much in value, in C and D. It should be as much as . E


What does 'those' refer to in E?

Think.. which are valued here ?

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Factories can mass-produce beautiful glass vessels that are valued almost as much as that of the old-fashioned glass-blower that remain.

(A) that are valued almost as much as that of the old-fashioned glass-blowers that remain
(B) of a value that is almost as much as that of the old-fashioned glass-blowers that remain
(C) almost as much in value as those of the remaining old-fashioned glassblowers
(D) almost as much in value as that of the remaining old-fashioned glass-blowers
(E) valued almost as much as those of the remaining old-fashioned glassblowers

I doubt the OA. Someone please explain.
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Factories can mass-produce beautiful glass vessels that are valued almost as much as that of the old-fashioned glass-blower that remain.

(A) that are valued almost as much as that of the old-fashioned glass-blowers that remain - pronoun error
(B) of a value that is almost as much as that of the old-fashioned glass-blowers that remain - pronoun error
(C) almost as much in value as those of the remaining old-fashioned glassblowers - modifier error
(D) almost as much in value as that of the remaining old-fashioned glass-blowers - Modifier + pronoun error
(E) valued almost as much as those of the remaining old-fashioned glassblowers - Correct
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Re: Factories can mass-produce beautiful glass vessels that are valued [#permalink]
Singular pronoun that cannot refer to plural vessels, hence the use of that is wrong in options a,b,d
In option c as much in is the wrong idiom, option e corrects all the above mistakes

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Re: Factories can mass-produce beautiful glass vessels that are valued [#permalink]
Errors are:
1. Ambiguity WRT that.
2. Almost should modify valued.

(A) that are valued almost as much as that of the old-fashioned glass-blowers that remain
(B) of a value that is almost as much as that of the old-fashioned glass-blowers that remain
(C) almost as much in value as those of the remaining old-fashioned glassblowers
(D) almost as much in value as that of the remaining old-fashioned glass-blowers
(E) valued almost as much as those of the remaining old-fashioned glassblowers
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Factories can mass-produce beautiful glass vessels that are valued almost as much as that of the old-fashioned glass-blower that remain.

(A) that are valued almost as much as that of the old-fashioned glass-blowers that remain
(B) of a value that is almost as much as that of the old-fashioned glass-blowers that remain
(C) almost as much in value as those of the remaining old-fashioned glassblowers
(D) almost as much in value as that of the remaining old-fashioned glass-blowers
(E) valued almost as much as those of the remaining old-fashioned glassblowers

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MANHATTAN REVIEW OFFICIAL EXPLANATION:



Choices A and B use the singular pronoun ‘that’ with the plural verb form ‘remain’. ‘Almost as much in value’ in C and D is idiomatically incorrect. Choice E is the correct answer
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The Idiom is incorrect as much in value, in C and D. It should be as much as . E


What does 'those' refer to in E?


'Those' refers to 'values' of glassblowers.
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Re: Factories can mass-produce beautiful glass vessels that are valued [#permalink]
In option E what does "those" refer to?
Based on the pronoun it seems that the sentence means "valued almost as much as the values of the remaining old-fashioned glassblowers".
To me it seems wrong. I think it should be "that of" because we are referring to the collective value of the remaining old-fashioned glassblowers.
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In option E what does "those" refer to?
Based on the pronoun it seems that the sentence means "valued almost as much as the values of the remaining old-fashioned glassblowers".
To me it seems wrong. I think it should be "that of" because we are referring to the collective value of the remaining old-fashioned glassblowers.


"Those" refer to glass vessels here
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