Project SC Butler: Day 134 Sentence Correction (SC1)
OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONTHE PROMPTFirst prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.
THE OPTIONSQuote:
(A) First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.
• Introductory phrase correctly modifies sandwich
• the humble sandwich is followed by a nonessential modifier set off by commas. Past participle (verbED) "named" correctly refers to sandwich
• three phrases later, we find the correct verb IS
Quote:
(B) Having been first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich.
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Having been is not automatically wrong. But "having been verbED" typically implies causal connection, and none exists here.
-- Having been sick, he could not meet the project deadline.
• Compare to A. Option A is better.
• past participles (verbEDs) modify the immediately preceding noun.
The world is not "named so" because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich. Last I checked, the world was not named "sandwich."
• The modifier
named so is to far from its noun
Quote:
(C) The humble sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century and is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, is named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich.
• Usage of IS in
first prepared by the Arabs is nonsensical and ruins parallelism
• The sandwich, first Xed [
past participle]
and IS a Y [
verb phrase], is Zed because of blah blah blah. Wrong.
The
and signals parallelism. The word IS ruins parallelism.
Quote:
(D) Named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, and a breakfast staple of people all across the world, the humble sandwich.
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NO VERB • In the three intro phrases,
named and
prepared are parallel in the list of three introductory phrases, but
a staple is not.
Quote:
(E) The Earl of Sandwich, after whom the humble sandwich is named, first prepared it with the Arabs in the 15th century, now a breakfast staple of people all across the world.
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• MEANING is distorted rather hilariously: The Earl of Sandwich did not make sandwiches with the Arabs in the 15th century.
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now a breakfast staple is too far from what it modifies—
the humble sandwichAnswer AWhen we read a modifier that describes something, whatever the modifier describes needs to be as close as possible to the noun.
In options B and E, the modifiers "named so" and "now a breakfast staple" are too far from the noun
Modifier rules for past participles(1) an introductory modifier that is anchored by a past participle (a verbed) MUST modify the subject of the immediately following clause.
In option (A),
First prepared . . . refers to the subject of the subsequent clause.
(2) a past participle that comes after a noun modifies the immediately preceding noun, with or without a comma in between.
In option (A),
named correctly modifies
sandwich In option (C), although other errors exist,
prepared correctly modifies
sandwichOption (A) displays a well-balanced sentence. One modifier precedes the noun/subject, another modifier follows the subject immediately, and the sentence is clear.
COMMENTScristianosubo and
StrugglingGmat2910 , welcome to SC Butler.
Arvind42 ,
Raxit85 ,
Xylan ,
prashanths ,
J2S2019 ,
firas92 ,
Archit3110 , and
amitanshumaity , glad to see you all again.
I am happy that the very cool Game of Timers did not steal you all!
Most of these answers are very good.
Those who explained their answers get kudos.
A couple of you, be a little more thorough, please? Like, three words more.
I will use an example that is not part of this question.
Wearing a neon pink helmet and white fringed cowboy boots, the woman who I know from school just rode by on a motorcycle like a bat out of hell, and it was hilarious.Someone writes: PRONOUN ERROR
What the heck are you talking about? If I am just starting to study SC or really frustrated generally, I might not even know that
it needs a noun antecedent.
If I have learned a little, I may understand IT issue, but I might not know why who/whom is a problem.
We don't know who will read these posts after us.
If we write
pronoun errors, the first person has no idea what we mean and the second person could interpret
errors as singular. (The word is not singular. But if the second person does not know that who/whom is an issue, she will think that
errors is a typo or will be lost.)
You get the idea. It does not matter that others have clarified the error.
Maybe the way you phrase ideas "works" for a certain sort of person. Give 'em a chance to understand you.
Enjoy the rest of your weekend.