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IMO A.

First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world[/u].

(A) First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world. - Noun modifiers, 'the humble sandwich' and 'named so....' correctly placed in the sentence. Let's hold the option as there is no error.

(B) Having been first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich. - Modifier error, named so... mentioned is placed far away from the noun i.e. the humble sandwich.

(C) The humble sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century and is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, is named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich. - Modifier error, named so... mentioned is placed far away from the noun i.e. the humble sandwich and parallelism error.

(D) Named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, and a breakfast staple of people all across the world, the humble sandwich. - Modifier error, named so... mentioned is placed far away from the noun i.e. the humble sandwich.

(E) The Earl of Sandwich, after whom the humble sandwich is named, first prepared it with the Arabs in the 15th century, now a breakfast staple of people all across the world. - The earl of sandwich as a subject changes the meaning of the sentence as compared to original sentence.
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First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.

Sentence Structure
Subject - Verb:
      First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century,
    the humble sandwich
        , named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich,
      is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.

Issues:
    Could NOT find anything suspiciously wrong.
    If nothing better appears ------> A is the answer.

Answer choice analysis:
    (A) First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.
      A is the winner!

    (B) Having been first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich.
      named so ... incorrectly modifies world. It should modify the humble sandwich.

    (C) The humble sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century and is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, is named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich.
      Parallelism issue: verb-ED modifier( first prepared by the Arabs) is NOT parallel to a verb-phrase( is a breakfast staple of ... )


    (D) Named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, and a breakfast staple of people all across the world, the humble sandwich.
      It's a fragment. No verb is mapped to the subject( the humble sandwich).


    (E) The Earl of Sandwich, after whom the humble sandwich is named, first prepared it with the Arabs in the 15th century, now a breakfast staple of people all across the world.
      Modifier issue: now a breakfast staple of people all -----is INCORRECTLY modifying----> Arabs in the 15th century
      Meaning issue: E changes the intended meaning.
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(A) First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.
Correct. Both modifiers close to the noun sandwich

(B) Having been first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich.
'named so ...' should modify sandwich and so should be close to the noun

(C) The humble sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century and is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, is named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich.
'is a breakfast staple of people all across the world' should be the main clause, but here it is a subordinate clause to the main clause 'is named so....'

(D) Named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, and a breakfast staple of people all across the world, the humble sandwich.
No complete clause - sentence fragment

(E) The Earl of Sandwich, after whom the humble sandwich is named, first prepared it with the Arabs in the 15th century, now a breakfast staple of people all across the world.
'now a breakfast staple...' is modifying Arabs in the 15th century

Answer should be A.
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IMO Correct answer is A

First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.

(A) First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world - No Error, "Named", Verb+ed modifier correctly modifies the closest noun before the "," i.e, the humble sandwich

(B) Having been first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich. -Incorrect modification, ",named...." modifies the world

(C) The humble sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century and is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, is named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich. - Parallelism marker AND present here, & not a parallel structure before & after AND; also Modification error

(D) Named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, and a breakfast staple of people all across the world, the humble sandwich. Modification error, When Verb+ed modifier is introduced at the start of the sentence with comma, it modifies the subject of the sentence.

(E) The Earl of Sandwich, after whom the humble sandwich is named, first prepared it with the Arabs in the 15th century, now a breakfast staple of people all across the world. - Changes the meaning
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(A) First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.

IMO, the correct answer

(B) Having been first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich.

i. Establishes an unnecessary causality between "first prepared by the Arabs" and "the humble sandwich is a breakfast staple"

ii. Modifier error

(C) The humble sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century and is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, is named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich.

i. 'and is...' brings in a parallelism error.
ii. The modifier "is named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich" modifies the wrong clause as it is supposed to modify the subject, "the humble sandwich" but is placed too far away from it.

(D) Named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, and a breakfast staple of people all across the world, the humble sandwich.

i. Modifier placed too far away from subject.
ii. Run on - No verb for the subject 'the humble sandwich'

(E) The Earl of Sandwich, after whom the humble sandwich is named, first prepared it with the Arabs in the 15th century, now a breakfast staple of people all across the world.

i. Awkward construction and distorted meaning.
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IMO A;

First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.

(A) First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.

(B) Having been first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich. ; modifier error

(C) The humble sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century and is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, is named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich. ll ism error

(D) Named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, and a breakfast staple of people all across the world, the humble sandwich. modifier error

(E) The Earl of Sandwich, after whom the humble sandwich is named, first prepared it with the Arabs in the 15th century, now a breakfast staple of people all across the world. pronoun error





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First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.

(A) First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.

(B) Having been first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich.

(C) The humble sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century and is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, is named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich.

(D) Named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, and a breakfast staple of people all across the world, the humble sandwich.

(E) The Earl of Sandwich, after whom the humble sandwich is named, first prepared it with the Arabs in the 15th century, now a breakfast staple of people all across the world.
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First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.

5 sec scan for errors doesn't gives any split so take each option

(A) First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world. : correct option

(B) Having been first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich. :, named modifies world thats illogical

(C) The humble sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century and is a breakfast staple of people all across the world, is named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich. :the humble sandwich noun has no verb

(D) Named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, and a breakfast staple of people all across the world, the humble sandwich. :the humble sandwich noun doesn't have a verb

(E) The Earl of Sandwich, after whom the humble sandwich is named, first prepared it with the Arabs in the 15th century, now a breakfast staple of people all across the world. : the earl noun has no verb

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First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century, the humble sandwich, named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich, is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.

Meaning Analysis: The humble sandwich was first prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century
the humble sandwich is named so because of its association with Earl of Sandwich.
The humble sandwich is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.

Sentence Structure: Understand how the modifiers are placed and which entity it modifies is the key here.

First prepared by the Arabs in the 15th century--> Modifies -->the humble sandwich
named so because of its association with the Earl of Sandwich (Verb-ed modifier) --> Modifies --> The humble sandwich
is a breakfast staple of people all across the world.--> Verb and object of the clause --> Subject ( The humble sandwich)

So, the structure is --> Modifier, Subject, Modifier, Verb+object.[Understand how beautifully the sentence is set up].

All the modifiers modify their intended entities and S-V is accounted for.

IMHO A
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Option B has the modifier "named so.." very far from the noun it is modifying (humble sandwich)
In option C, the use of "and" is wrong. When "and" is used, the two things it connects has to be parallel grammatically and logically. Here, "first prepared.." is a past participle modifier whereas "is a breakfast.." is a clause.
Option D is a classic error. "Named so.." has to modify Humble sandwich but that is not the case here.
E is really messed up. It has changed the whole meaning of the sentence. Hence wrong.

Hence IMO Option A is correct answer.
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