(A) That the exploration and subsequent mapping of the underwater cave system’s Byzantine interior
requires extensive experience and caution has been proven both by the near-death experiences of amateur cave divers and by the massive costs of the rescue operations to save those amateur cave divers.
- exploration and subsequent mapping are two entities needing a plural verb: require
- Parallelism is correct here
(B)
That the exploration and subsequent mapping of the underwater cave system’s Byzantine interior
require extensive experience and caution
has been proven just
as much by the near-death experiences of amateur cave divers
as by the massive costs of the rescue operations to save those amateur cave divers.
-Correct verb : require
-Correct parallelism and idiomatic usage: idiom 'as much as' calls for parallelism between 'the near-death experiences' and 'the massive costs'
- That...has been proven : no SVA error
(C) Proven just
as much by the near-death experiences of amateur cave divers
as well as by the massive costs of the rescue operations to save those amateur cave divers, the exploration and subsequent mapping of the underwater cave system’s interior requires extensive experience and caution.
- Wrong idiomatic usage: as much as well as - should be 'as much as
- 'Byzantine' removed
(D) The exploration and subsequent mapping of the underwater cave system’s interior
requires extensive experience and caution, as has been proven not only by the near-death experiences of amateur cave divers but also by the massive costs of the rescue operations to save them.
- exploration and subsequent mapping are two entities needing a plural verb: require
- 'Byzantine' removed
(E) The process of exploring and mapping the underwater cave system’s interior
require extensive experience and caution, proven
both by the near-death experiences of amateur cave divers
as much as by the massive costs of the rescue operations to save them.
- The process is singular - verb 'require' must take the singular form 'requires'
- Wrong idiomatic usage: 'both...as much as' is wrong - 'both...and' is the right usage
- 'Byzantine' removed