GMAT2k17,
Supporting your family is a noble endeavor. Working 30 hours a week during college doesn't seem convincing, however. That implies that you would'nt have time to attend college, leave alone study after hours. There is a balance between helping your family, and not giving college work the importance it deserves.
The second is acceptable. It would help if you can demonstrate that you've matured using examples from your recent past.
About business schools having data about students from your college, that is just a hypothesis.
Best wishes,
Karthik
gmat2k17
Hi Karthik,
Thank you very much for responding.
Follow-up query on explanations -
Supporting your family financially by taking part-time tuitions of more than 30 hours a week while studying is a good explanation? In addition, maturing as one ages and realizes the importance of giving his best to everything in life is a good explanation?
Also, I have tried to search through linkedin, but filtering with 'AND' criteria is not yet possible in Linkedin, and hence I haven't been able to figure out students who have gone onto study in US elite universities, particularly for MBA. I don't know a single person from recent batches who has gone to study for MBA abroad from my university. Many have preferred MS path, but none have taken the MBA route.
So when you say that universities know based on data over many years, how can one ascertain this fact?