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If his longevity claim would be confirmed, Carmelo Flores Laura, a former rancher from Bolivia, would have the longest verified lifespan of anyone in human history.


A) If his longevity claim would be confirmed

B) Should his longevity's claim be confirmed

C) Had his longevity claim been confirmed

D) That his claim to longevity was confirmed

E) Were his longevity claim confirmed



I am not sure about this. The original sentence uses would with if, which is outright wrong.
A. Would cannot be used in If clause- Incorrect
B. Longevitys claim is non sensical.
C. For past perfect continuous to be correct, the non underlined portion should have been- Carmelo Flores Laura would have had the longest verified lifespan of anyone in human history. But we do not have that option.
D. Does not make sense at all.
E. By POE E looks correct.
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If his longevity claim would be confirmed, Carmelo Flores Laura, a former rancher from Bolivia, would have the longest verified lifespan of anyone in human history.


A) If his longevity claim would be confirmed
In the If (clause), Then (clause) construction, if the then (clause) has would have verb, then the verb of the if (clause) must be past perfect tense. However, in this case, the verb is simple future tense. Thus, this choice is incorrect.

B) Should his longevity's claim be confirmed
This sentence uses the possessive noun longevity's claim which literally translates to the claim belongs to longevity which does not make any sense. This is incorrect.

C) Had his longevity claim been confirmed
Correct option, since it uses the past perfect tense with 'would have' verb.

D) That his claim to longevity was confirmed
The underlined portion is a clause: That his claim is the subject and was confirmed is the verb. Hence, this means that two clauses are joined with just a comma. Hence, this option is incorrect.

E) Were his longevity claim confirmed
Were is a plural verb which has no plural noun as referrant in this sentence. This usage is awkward and not GMAT-like.
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My answer is (C). It took me 28 seconds.

This sentence uses the subjunctive mood. When the main clause uses "would have", the subordinate clause uses "had been". "If his longevity claim had been claimed" is the same as "Had his longevity claim been confirmed". (C) matches my expectation.

Update: I now realize that the main clause only uses "would" (Past future) instead of "would have" (Past future perfect). So the reasoning above does not apply.

Originally posted by zhanbo on 05 Apr 2020, 09:31.
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wow. Tuffie.! went with "C" got it wrong :(

below is my reasoning.

If his longevity claim would be confirmed, Carmelo Flores Laura, a former rancher from Bolivia, would have the longest verified lifespan of anyone in human history.

"Would have the longest" highlights what type of question it is.


A) If his longevity claim would be confirmed

This conditional clause is written as hypothetical construction. this is terrible, this should be written in past-perfect, as the non-underlined portion is written in "would have the longest verified ".


B) Should his longevity's claim be confirmed
Should ? goodbye!

C) Had his longevity claim been confirmed
I thought this was past perfect usage of had, maybe not ? as there is no verb after "had". I thought this was right, kept it on hold and tried eliminating rest of the options.

D) That his claim to longevity was confirmed
Wrong.


E) Were his longevity claim confirmed

Never came across a sentence that begins with a verb, so eliminated and I think my ear fooled me as well.

Thus went with C
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If his longevity claim would be confirmed, Carmelo Flores Laura, a former rancher from Bolivia, would have the longest verified lifespan of anyone in human history.


A) If his longevity claim would be confirmed

B) Should his longevity's claim be confirmed

C) Had his longevity claim been confirmed

D) That his claim to longevity was confirmed

E) Were his longevity claim confirmed




I chose wrong answer, i.e. C, but when I came back and check option E. It makes complete sense to me.
This is hypothetical subjunctive If x were happen y would .... or we can write in were x happen y would
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Hello @GMATNinja@GMATNinjaTwo@EMPOWERgmatVerbal@mikemcgarry

Here are my analysis for this question . Experts can you please review my inputs to each answer choice and advise if I eliminated the wrong choices for right reasons or not

If his longevity claim would be confirmed, Carmelo Flores Laura, a former rancher from Bolivia, would have the longest verified lifespan of anyone in human history.


A) If his longevity claim would be confirmed – as a general rule would is used when an event occurred in past tense i.e to indicate future event from perspective of past. In this case , if caluse is stated in hypothetical context so subjunctive mood for If clause is preferred

B) Should his longevity's claim be confirmed – usage of should is not correct as “should” signals obligation.

C) Had his longevity claim been confirmed – Had here doesn’t indicate past perfect . “Had his longevity claim been confirmed” means that if his longevity claim was confirmed Doesn’t reflect subjunctive mood

D) That his claim to longevity was confirmed – This alters the intended meaning of original sentence. Per the meaning if X…then Y . As per this choice it means that ----the fact that the longevity was confirmed

E) Were his longevity claim confirmed – this is correct
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Re: If his longevity claim would be confirmed Carmelo Flores Laura [#permalink]
I too used the same logic to eliminate option E, there is no plural noun to which the plural verb "were" refers

Then why is the answer option E?
Can you please help?


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If his longevity claim would be confirmed, Carmelo Flores Laura, a former rancher from Bolivia, would have the longest verified lifespan of anyone in human history.


A) If his longevity claim would be confirmed
In the If (clause), Then (clause) construction, if the then (clause) has would have verb, then the verb of the if (clause) must be past perfect tense. However, in this case, the verb is simple future tense. Thus, this choice is incorrect.

B) Should his longevity's claim be confirmed
This sentence uses the possessive noun longevity's claim which literally translates to the claim belongs to longevity which does not make any sense. This is incorrect.

C) Had his longevity claim been confirmed
Correct option, since it uses the past perfect tense with 'would have' verb.

D) That his claim to longevity was confirmed
The underlined portion is a clause: That his claim is the subject and was confirmed is the verb. Hence, this means that two clauses are joined with just a comma. Hence, this option is incorrect.

E) Were his longevity claim confirmed
Were is a plural verb which has no plural noun as referrant in this sentence. This usage is awkward and not GMAT-like.


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