warrior1991
AndrewN Hope you are doing good.
I have a doubt in this question.Is option E incorrect or D is better than E??
Option E when rephrased
Quote:
In its most recent approach, the comet Crommelin passed the Earth at about the same distance and in about the same position, some 25 degrees above the horizon, as Halley’s comet will pass[do] the next time it appears.
I thought E is sounding correct and marked E.
Please elaborate.
Hello,
warrior1991. It has been a while. I see that there are different views on the correctness of (E). My issue with it is that
will, on its own, allows us to understand the action of passing:
the comet C passed at about the same distance and position as comet H will [pass] in the future. Thus, we do not need a substitute verb in
to do, whose inclusion is extraneous:
the comet C passed at about the same distance and position as comet H will [pass] [pass] in the future. Yes,
will do in (E) could work on its own, as in
will [pass], so it is not grammatically unsound. But (D) conveys the same meaning in fewer words and, as a bonus, places the verb ahead of the noun in the comparison, a stylistic preference of the GMAT™ (e.g.,
John has more money than does Susan is preferred over
John has more money than Susan does). In short, there is no compelling reason to go against (D), whereas I have a doubt about (E), so the former is the safer option.
- Andrew