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In preparation for the prediction of a major earthquake that will hit the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services for identifying earthquake damage and to pinpoint the most affected areas within two hours of the event.

(A) In preparation for the prediction of a major earthquake that will hit the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services for identifying

(B) In preparing for the prediction that a major earthquake will hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network that will identify

(C) In preparing for a major earthquake that is predicted to hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network to identify

(D) To prepare for the prediction of a major earthquake hitting the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services to identify

(E) To prepare for a major earthquake that is predicted to hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network that will identify
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In preparing for..??Is this correct usage??

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In preparation for the prediction of a major earthquake that will hit the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services for identifying earthquake damage and to pinpoint the most affected areas within two hours of the event.
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Very easy to solve if you find the clue in the sentence. The clue lies in the non-underlined portion.

"and to pinpoint" - since there is infinitive form (to + verb) after AND the infinitive verb form should be used before AND.

With this it leaves us with two options C and D.

Between C and D, there are few errors such as modifier, meaning etc.

Modifier - The California Office of Emergency Services
Meaning - The preparation is avoid the earthquake not the prediction.

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It was between C & D - "To Identify" parallelism .
Chose C, as D states "To prepare for the prediction", which is wrong.

However, is "In preparing for" the correct usage?

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It was between C & D - "To Identify" parallelism .
Chose C, as D states "To prepare for the prediction", which is wrong.

However, is "In preparing for" the correct usage?


Yes, acceptable. Does not sound odd to my ears. Why do you think it is not?

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It was between C & D - "To Identify" parallelism .
Chose C, as D states "To prepare for the prediction", which is wrong.

However, is "In preparing for" the correct usage?



yes
I think
to prepare to predict
is correct.

to do for somthing
to do to do something

are both correct but in the first something must not be an action presented by a verb. hard point here
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It was between C & D - "To Identify" parallelism .
Chose C, as D states "To prepare for the prediction", which is wrong.

However, is "In preparing for" the correct usage?


Yes, acceptable. Does not sound odd to my ears. Why do you think it is not?


Not sure about the grammar part of it, but just didn't sound right to me. Cool, if it's the right usage.

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It was between C & D - "To Identify" parallelism .
Chose C, as D states "To prepare for the prediction", which is wrong.

However, is "In preparing for" the correct usage?



yes
I think
to prepare to predict
is correct.

to do for somthing
to do to do something

are both correct but in the first something must not be an action presented by a verb. hard point here


Understand. Kinda confusing though.

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(A) In preparation for the prediction of a major earthquake that will hit the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services for identifying - Incorrect - Modifier error - 'In preparation for .... earthquake' incorrectly modifies 'Satellite based computer network'

(B) In preparing for the prediction that a major earthquake will hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network that will identify - Incorrect - Parallelism error - 'will identify' and 'to pinpoint' are not parallel

(C) In preparing for a major earthquake that is predicted to hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network to identify - Correct

(D) To prepare for the prediction of a major earthquake hitting the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services to identify - Incorrect - Modifier error

(E) To prepare for a major earthquake that is predicted to hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network that will identify - Incorrect - Parallelism error

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In preparation for the prediction of a major earthquake that will hit the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services for identifying earthquake damage and to pinpoint the most affected areas within two hours of the event.

(A) In preparation for the prediction of a major earthquake that will hit the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services for identifying

(B) In preparing for the prediction that a major earthquake will hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network that will identify

(C) In preparing for a major earthquake that is predicted to hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network to identify

(D) To prepare for the prediction of a major earthquake hitting the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services to identify

(E) To prepare for a major earthquake that is predicted to hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network that will identify



d is wrong because
to identify and to pinpoint can not be a purpose adverb of subject network.
to do can be use as adverb in a sentence , subject of which dose not perform the action of "to do" . but this point is hard and never tested by gmat sc. forget this point
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In preparation for the prediction of a major earthquake that will hit the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services for identifying earthquake damage and to pinpoint the most affected areas within two hours of the event.

(A) In preparation for the prediction of a major earthquake that will hit the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services for identifying

(B) In preparing for the prediction that a major earthquake will hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network that will identify

(C) In preparing for a major earthquake that is predicted to hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network to identify

(D) To prepare for the prediction of a major earthquake hitting the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services to identify

(E) To prepare for a major earthquake that is predicted to hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network that will identify



to points:-

1) ||sm : to... and to.....
2) modifier In prepration ....,board

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would someone mind explaining why E is incorrect?

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would someone mind explaining why E is incorrect?


that will identify is not parallel -- to pinpoint the most affected areas within two hours of the event

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In preparing for a major earthquake that is predicted to hit the state - is it present participle?
Can infinitive of purpose "To prepare" be used as a noun modifier? Or should it be used only with verb modifiers, i.e. "to free my leg, I lifted the weight.
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Hi, In option D is there a modifier error too? To prepare ------- , do we need to have California Office of Emergency Service just after comma?
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Hi, In option D is there a modifier error too? To prepare ------- , do we need to have California Office of Emergency Service just after comma?
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Yes, California Office of ES is preparing for earthquake, not a satellite
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Hi, In option D is there a modifier error too? To prepare ------- , do we need to have California Office of Emergency Service just after comma?
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Hi, In option D is there a modifier error too? To prepare ------- , do we need to have California Office of Emergency Service just after comma?
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Yes, California Office of ES is preparing for earthquake, not a satellite


"To prepare for the prediction of a major earthquake hitting the state" is not a noun modifier but an adverbial phrase modifying the verb. Hence placing "a satellite-based computer network" immediately after it is not a problem. The problem with D is another modifier "hitting the state", which wrongly changes the meaning.

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30 seconds approach

Question about: modifier, subject verb complement + using of ing form versus verb infinite

C is the best, all is in the right sequence

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In preparation for the prediction of a major earthquake that will hit the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services for identifying earthquake damage and to pinpoint the most affected areas within two hours of the event.

(A) In preparation for the prediction of a major earthquake that will hit the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services for identifying

(B) In preparing for the prediction that a major earthquake will hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network that will identify

(C) In preparing for a major earthquake that is predicted to hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network to identify

(D) To prepare for the prediction of a major earthquake hitting the state, a satellite-based computer network is being built by the California Office of Emergency Services to identify

(E) To prepare for a major earthquake that is predicted to hit the state, the California Office of Emergency Services is building a satellite-based computer network that will identify


Preparation for prediction? -- Funny :P A, B & D are out.
E -> misses parallelism [to identify and to pinpoint]

C is right :D
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