OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONgeneris
Project SC Butler: Sentence Correction (SC1)
THE PROMPTQuote:
Mr. Tanner has looked in all the bookstores in the city for an instruction book on how to play the concertina without success.
A) concertina
without successB) concertina
unsuccessfullyC) concertina
without being successfulD) concertina,
having no success in his search
E) concertina, but his search has been unsuccessful
• Split #1 - meaningHas Mr. Tanner looked for a book that teaches a person how to play a concertina
poorly?
Phrased differently, has Mr. Tanner looked for a book that teaches a person how to play a concertina that sounds awful?
No.
The placement of adverbs is more flexible than the placement of adjectives, but adverbs must not create confusion.
Options A, B, and C create confusion.
→
without success, unsuccessfully, and
without being successful should modify Mr. Tanner's search, but they seem to modify
how to play [the instruction book]
→
wrong when A, B, and C are inserted into the blank: an instruction book on how to play the concertina __________Eliminate A, B, and C.
• Split #2: clearer construction, better dictionCompare options D and E.Stylistically, option E is better than D.
(E) is more straightforward than D and presents contrast more noticeably:
E contains two IC's
with parallel verb structures and a simple conjunction,
butIn general, a working verb such as
has been unsuccessful is stronger than an ___ING word such as
having no success[/color] in his search"
Option E contains parallelism that makes the sentence easier to follow: Mr. Tanner
has looked . . ., but his search
has been unsuccessful.
Eliminate D.
The correct answer is E.
[color=#00a651]COMMENTSsuryakantraycha and
RiseAndShinee , welcome to SC Butler.
These replies range from very good to outstanding.
Impressive!
Whoever follows gets to read a thread full of good posts that explain why to eliminate the four worst options.
Nicely done. Be safe.