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The promptgeneris
Open to the public and operated like conventional hotels, condominium hotels permit buyers to acquire a specific room or suite, as well as a proportionate interest in the rest of the establishment.
The optionsQuote:
(A) condominium hotels permit buyers to acquire a specific room or suite, as well as
Looks fine.
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(B) buyers are permitted to acquire a specific room or suite in a condominium hotel, as well as
• modifier error.
Buyers are
not open to the public and operated like conventional hotels.• passive voice (
buyers are permitted) is not as good as active voice in
permit buyers, in options A and D
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(C) a specific room or suite in condominium hotels may be acquired by buyers, as well as acquiring[/color
• modifier error similar to that in B.
A specific room or suite is not
open to the public and operated like conventional hotels, either.
• compare
may be acquired by buyers ( passive language) to active language in A and D,
permit buyers. The latter options win.
•
acquiring is inane; it suggests that a specific room or suite acquires a proportionate interest in the rest of the establishment
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(D) condominium hotels permit buyers to acquire a specific room or suite, as well as [color=#ff0000]acquiring
• parallelism: to acquire X, as well as [to acquire] Y. X and Y are not parallel.
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(E) it is permitted for buyers to acquire a specific room or suite in a condominium hotel, as well as the acquisition of
• modifier error: the clause "it is permitted for buyers to acquire a specific room" is not
open to the public and operated like conventional hotels•
acquire and
acquisition are redundant
• a stylistic trainwreck
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Verbal Review 2020 NEW QUESTION
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OFFICIAL EXPLANATIONHIGHLIGHTS• Take note:
as well as is in every option. It means
and.
I'm not too sure what started the fairly widespread condemnation of
as well as that I see flatly asserted on the boards,
but maybe those assertions will abate somewhat.
• In addition to having grammar errors, B, C, and E are stylistic and rhetorical disasters.
• Split #1: Modifier errors (or The Dangling Modifier)The introductory phrase
Open to the public and operated like conventional hotels must modify
condominium hotels. Otherwise we have a "dangling modifier," which happens when it is not clear from the sentence
what the modifier is modifying.
Which noun is "open to the public and operated like conventional hotels"? (Condominium hotels.)
Not buyers, as in option B.
Not a specific room or suite in condominium hotels, as in option C
Not it (not the it in it is permitted for buyers), as in option E
Eliminate B, C, and E
• Split #2: ParallelismThe construction could be:
to acquire X or Y, as well as Z
or
to acquire X or Y, as well as to acquire Z
Option A exhibits the first pattern
. . . to acquire
a specific room or suite in a condominium hotel, as well as
a proportionate interest . . .
Option D violates parallelism. D says
. . .permits the buyer
to acquire X or Y, as well
acquiring Z. Not parallel.
Eliminate D.
Answer A