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Despite the increase in annual precipitation, most meteorologists acknowledged that the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained largely the same.

A. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained

B. that it was unlikely for the precipitation continuing to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain

C. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue to increase, with snow and rainfall to remain

D. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained

E. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain

Hello guys!
This is a very easy question if you use the basics well.
Eliminate Option A, Parallelism error spotted.
Eliminate Option B, Parallelism error and use of 'unlikely for the precipitation' is unrequired.
Eliminate Option D for Parallelism error.
Eliminate Option E, the construction is flawed.

IMO Option E was close.

Option C seemed fine without any errors.

Kindly educate me if the answers do not adhere to the OA and OE. :angel:

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imo C

Despite the increase in annual precipitation, most meteorologists acknowledged that the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained largely the same.

A. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained

-- Parallelism error .
-- Also award meaning



B. that it was unlikely for the precipitation continuing to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain

-- It has no referent and also avoidable .
-- Parallelism error


C. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue to increase, with snow and rainfall to remain

-- Correct

D. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained

-- Meaning issue .-- unlikelihood and would is redundant
-- Parallelism error


E. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain
-- Meaning change . unlikelihood and would is redundant
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Pack 16, Question 1 of 5:

Despite the increase in annual precipitation, most meteorologists acknowledged that the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained largely the same.

A. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained

B. that it was unlikely for the precipitation continuing to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain

C. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue to increase, with snow and rainfall to remain

D. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained

E. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain


IMO C

A. change of meaning, meteorologists acknowledged only about precipitation
B. Parallelism error
C. correct (with gives additional info)
D, E meaning change and parallelism error.

Welcome to the contest, monikakumar! You were very close on this one - check out the official explanation in the comments to see how we tackled this question! :)
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Despite the increase in annual precipitation, most meteorologists acknowledged that the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained largely the same.

A. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained

B. that it was unlikely for the precipitation continuing to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain

C. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue to increase, with snow and rainfall to remain

D. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained

E. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain

Hello guys!
This is a very easy question if you use the basics well.
Eliminate Option A, Parallelism error spotted.
Eliminate Option B, Parallelism error and use of 'unlikely for the precipitation' is unrequired.
Eliminate Option D for Parallelism error.
Eliminate Option E, the construction is flawed.

IMO Option E was close.

Option C seemed fine without any errors.

Kindly educate me if the answers do not adhere to the OA and OE. :angel:

Thank you!

Regards,
Raunak Damle :)

You were very close, raunakd11! Check out the official explanation in the comments to see how we tackled this tricky question! :)
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imo C

Despite the increase in annual precipitation, most meteorologists acknowledged that the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained largely the same.

A. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained

-- Parallelism error .
-- Also award meaning



B. that it was unlikely for the precipitation continuing to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain

-- It has no referent and also avoidable .
-- Parallelism error


C. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue to increase, with snow and rainfall to remain

-- Correct

D. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained

-- Meaning issue .-- unlikelihood and would is redundant
-- Parallelism error


E. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain
-- Meaning change . unlikelihood and would is redundant

You were so close, DasAshishAshutosh! Check out the official explanation for more details on how to tackle this question. It was a tricky one for sure! :)
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Despite the increase in annual precipitation, most meteorologists acknowledged that the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained largely the same.

A. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained

B. that it was unlikely for the precipitation continuing to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain

C. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue to increase, with snow and rainfall to remain

D. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained

E. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain

Hello guys!
This is a very easy question if you use the basics well.
Eliminate Option A, Parallelism error spotted.
Eliminate Option B, Parallelism error and use of 'unlikely for the precipitation' is unrequired.
Eliminate Option D for Parallelism error.
Eliminate Option E, the construction is flawed.

IMO Option E was close.

Option C seemed fine without any errors.

Kindly educate me if the answers do not adhere to the OA and OE. :angel:

Thank you!

Regards,
Raunak Damle :)

You were very close, raunakd11! Check out the official explanation in the comments to see how we tackled this tricky question! :)


Thanks alot EMPOWERgmatVerbal
I totally ignored the that parallelism and focused more on the infinitive part.
Appreciate your concern! :D


Regards,
Raunak Damle :thumbsup:
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Despite the increase in annual precipitation, most meteorologists acknowledged that the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained largely the same.

A. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained

B. that it was unlikely for the precipitation continuing to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain

C. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue to increase, with snow and rainfall to remain

D. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained

E. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain

This question deals with parallelism. The things the meteorologists agreed on must be worded the same way. We also need to make sure the verbs used in both phrases match. Let’s take a closer look at each option and see how they stack up:

A. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained
This is CORRECT. This sentence is parallel, indicated by using “that” twice in this sentence “that the precipitation” and “that snow and rainfall.” It also includes past-tense verbs in both phrases.

B. that it was unlikely for the precipitation continuing to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain
This is INCORRECT. The sentence is not parallel, indicated by using “that” and “for” at the beginning of each phrase. The phrase “unlikely for” is also not idiomatic.

C. that the precipitation was unlikely to continue to increase, with snow and rainfall to remain
This is INCORRECT. The sentence is not parallel, indicated by using “that” and “with.” There is also a past-tense “was unlikely to increase” and present tense “to remain,” which don’t match.

D. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue increasing and that snow and rainfall remained
This is INCORRECT. The sentence is not parallel, indicated by using “on the unlikelihood that,” and “with.” The phrase “acknowledged on the likelihood that” is not idiomatic either. Also, the verbs don’t really match up: “would continue” is a hypothetical tense, and “remained” is just plain past tense.

E. on the unlikelihood that the precipitation would continue to increase and for snow and rainfall to remain
This is INCORRECT. The sentence is not parallel, indicated by using “on the unlikelihood that,” and “for.” The phrase “acknowledged on the likelihood that” is not idiomatic either. Also, these verbs don’t match up: “would continue” is a hypothetical tense, and “to remain” is present tense.

There you have it - option A was the correct choice all along!

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Doesn't precipitation and snowfall and rainfall mean the same thing.
In option (c) we can treat the "with snow and rainfall to remain largely the same." act as a prepositional phrase which will modify the previous phrase "the precipitation was unlikely to continue increasing".
Because of this understanding that precipitation was unlikely to continue to increase given that rain and snowfall was not going to change.
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