The electronics company has unveiled what it claims
to be the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs less than 11 ounces.
The electronics company has unveiled what
it claims to be the world’s smallest network digital camcorder
,
the length of which
is that of a handheld computer,
and
it weighs less than 11 ounces.
Meaning: Some electronics company has unveiled a network digital camcorder. This company claims that this digital camcorder is the smallest in the world. Its length is the same as the length of a handheld computer and it weighs less than 11 ounces
Grammar: 1. All SV pairs are highlighted above and are correct as is
2. the first "it" (
what it claims) refers to the electronics company while the second "it" (
it weighs) logically refers to handheld computer
I personally don't find any deterministic errors in the sentence. I believe "Claims to be" is idiomatically correct. One can argue about some ambiguity with the usage of "it" but I believe that "it" logically can only refer to one entity (as mentioned above).
(A) to be the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, and it weighs
Hold(B) to be the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, weighing
Incorrect: The main error that stands out for me is ",weighing" as it seems to illogically modify the preceding clause. However, "weighing less than 11 ounces" neither shows the how aspect nor the result of "the length = length of a handheld computer
I believe the usage of "which" is fine as "in the world" modifies the preceding noun "camcorder" and so "which" can jump over this modifier to modify the far away noun "camcorder"
(C) is the smallest network digital camcorder in the world, which is as long as a handheld computer, and it weighs
Hold I honestly don't find any deterministic error out here. However, I believe "claims is" is better than "claims to be" Hence, for now, I would reject (A) and keep (C)
Again, "in the world" modifies the camcorder. So the "which" can jump to modify the noun "camcorder"
(D) is the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, which is as long as a handheld computer and weighs
Hold Wow! Okay, so now I find (D) grammatically correct as well as less wordy compared to (C). I like how the two facts - length and weight - are made parallel in one clause. Moreover, the "which" is right next to the noun it is supposed to modify. So, it removes the possible ambiguity that (C) has
(E) is the world’s smallest network digital camcorder, the length of which is that of a handheld computer, weighing
Incorrect Same as (B)
Answer: (D)