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Project SC Butler: Day 95: Sentence Correction (SC1)


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The recent increase in the number of tourists has caused overcrowding in the small town, to lead to more traffic jams, and provokes concerns among some residents that the quiet village atmosphere is being jeopardized.

(A) to lead to more traffic jams, and provokes

(B) leading to more traffic jams and provokes

(C) leading to an increase in traffic jams and provoking

(D) to lead to an increase in traffic jams and provoke

(E) to lead to an increase in traffic jams and provoked



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The recent increase in the number of tourists has caused overcrowding in the small town,
    leading to an increase in traffic jams and
    provoking concerns among some residents
that the quiet village atmosphere is being jeopardized.

IMHO (C) for correct modifier and Parallelism usage....
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Official Explanation :

The sentence provides a list outlining two results of the overcrowding, and the two results should be in parallel form. However, to lead to, is not parallel to provokes, so answer (A) contains an error.

Choices (D) and (E) repeat the original error, and can be eliminated.

Choice (B) incorrectly uses provokes instead of provoking. Only (C) maintains parallelism, so the correct answer is (C).
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Project SC Butler: Day 95: Sentence Correction (SC1)


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The recent increase in the number of tourists has caused overcrowding in the small town, to lead to more traffic jams, and provokes concerns among some residents that the quiet village atmosphere is being jeopardized.

Meaning:
The recent increase in the number of tourists has caused overcrowding in the small town
This situations have 2 consequences:
1. lead to more traffic jams
2. provokes concerns among some residents

Errors:

"to verb" is used to present intention.
Maybe there is some strategic intention of the government to attract some tourists to have some revenue, we don't know. But it seems not possible intentionally to increase traffic jams and raise concern among dweller (only according to this sentence), at least this is not the intended meaning of the author.

, and provokes - seems starting new IC with no subject, or 'and' tries to connect to verb 'lead' and 'provoke' unsuccessfully.
to lead and provokes are not // to each other.

POE

(A) to lead to more traffic jams, and provokes

(B) leading to more traffic jams and provokes

(D) to lead to an increase in traffic jams and provoke

(E) to lead to an increase in traffic jams and provoked

(C) leading to an increase in traffic jams and provoking

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