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Despite the fact that the impact of Daylight Saving Time, at the onset of which clocks are set forward by an hour, have been shown to be neutral, at best—research indicates that it may actually increase the number of car accidents occurring on the Monday after the clocks spring forward—some countries do not observe it.
A - Despite the fact that the impact of Daylight Saving Time, at the onset of which clocks are set forward by an hour, have been shown to be neutral, at best—research indicates that it may actually increase
B - Even though the impact of Daylight Saving Time, at the onset of which clocks are set forward by an hour, has been shown to be neutral, at best—research indicates that it actually increases
C - Since the impact of Daylight Saving Time, at the onset of which clocks are set forward by an hour, has been shown to be neutral, at best—research indicates that it actually increases
D - Because the impact of Daylight Saving Time, at the onset of which clocks are set forward by an hour, has been shown to be neutral—at best, research indicates that it may actually result in an increase in
E - Because Daylight Saving Time, at the onset of which clocks are set forward by an hour, has been shown to have a neutral impact, at best—research indicates that it may actually result in a possible increase in
Choice A: Option A uses "have" to refer to the singular noun "Daylight Saving Time". Furthermore, this option distorts the meaning of the sentence; the use of "Despite" indicates contrast, which does not make sense as the sentence is providing a reason why some countries do not adopt Daylight Saving Time. Thus, Option A is incorrect.
Choice B: Option B shares the second flaw of Option A, as it uses the term "Even though", which also shows contrast. Thus Option B is also incorrect.
Choice C: Option C preserves the intended meaning of the sentence, maintains proper subject-verb agreement, and utilizes proper comma placement. Thus, Option C is the correct answer.
Choice D: In Option D we can see an issue with the placement of the phrase "at best". This phrase should be separated from "neutral" by a comma, modifying it to indicate that the impact of Daylight Saving Time is, in the most positive interpretation, only neutral and never positive. Here, the comma has been placed after at best; thus, if we remove the information between two commas, the sentence will read "Because the impact of Daylight Saving Time, research indicates that it may actually result in an increase in...after the clocks spring forward—some countries do not observe it.", which is not a complete sentence. Therefore, Option D is incorrect.
Choice E: Option E repeats the comma placement error of Option D. Removing the information between commas will result in an incomplete sentence. Furthermore, "may actually result in a possible increase" is wordy and redundant. Thus, Option E is incorrect.
Hence, C is the best answer choice. To understand the concept of “Extra Information between Two Commas”, you may want to watch the following video (~1 minute):
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Experts' Global Team