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The broad appeal of detective stories lies in the repetition of a familiar formula; the variations of skillful characterization and clever plot construction serve not so much to change the formula, but rather render it more appealing to even the most demanding reader.

A. so much to change the formula, but rather
B. as much to change the formula as
C. so much to change the formula, as rather to
D. so much to change the formula as to
E. as much to change the formula, but to

MEANING
The appeal of such stories lies in the repetition of a similar formula; thus the variations in character and plot construction, do not serve to change the formula, but to make the stories more interesting the most demanding readers.

IDIOM: not so much X as Y (must maintain parallelism).

A. "not so much to… but rather render" unidiomatic, not parallel;
B. "not as much to… as render" unidiomatic and not parallel;
C. "not so much to… as rather to" unidiomatic;
E. not as much to… but to" unidiomatic;

Answer (D)
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The broad appeal of detective stories lies in the repetition of a familiar formula; the variations of skillful characterization and clever plot construction serve not so much to change the formula, but rather render it more appealing to even the most demanding reader.

A. so much to change the formula, but rather [to]

B. as much to change the formula as [to]

C. so much to change the formula, as rather to

D. so much to change the formula as to

E. as much to change the formula, but to

"Not so much .... as" is the correct idiom. Here it is used as "Not so much to .... as to".

A, B, C & E use different but incorrect versions of this idiom and are hence incorrect.

A & B also miss on the parallelism part by not using "to render" in the 2nd part of the parallel items.

IMO D is correct for using the correct idiom "Not so much .... as" and maintaing parallelism by using "to change" and "to render".

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https://gmatclub.com/forum/usage-of-x-b ... 25941.html
Above link can give more insight into "but rather" concept.
It is matter of idiom-not so much X as Y...


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The broad appeal of detective stories lies in the repetition of a familiar formula; the variations of skillful characterization and clever plot construction serve not so much to change the formula, but rather render it more appealing to even the most demanding reader.

A. so much to change the formula, but rather
B. as much to change the formula as
C. so much to change the formula, as rather to
D. so much to change the formula as to
E. as much to change the formula, but to

MEANING
The appeal of such stories lies in the repetition of a similar formula; thus the variations in character and plot construction, do not serve to change the formula, but to make the stories more interesting the most demanding readers.

IDIOM: not so much X as Y (must maintain parallelism).

A. "not so much to… but rather render" unidiomatic, not parallel and "but rather" redundant;
B. "not as much to… as render" unidiomatic and not parallel;
C. "not so much to… as rather to" unidiomatic "as rather" redundant;
E. not as much to… but to" unidiomatic;

Answer (D)
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The broad appeal of detective stories lies in the repetition of a familiar formula; the variations of skillful characterization and clever plot construction serve not so much to change the formula, but rather render it more appealing to even the most demanding reader.

A. so much to change the formula, but rather -- not to change but to render; "to" is missing

B. as much to change the formula as -- "to" is missing also it changes the meaning; not what the speaker infer

C. so much to change the formula, as rather to -- "as" is misuse

D. so much to change the formula as to -- to X as to Y correct

E. as much to change the formula, but to

Therefore, D
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Thorough reader reveals that the sentence tests an idiom and comparison. Here, the correct idiom is not so much X as Y.

A. so much to change the formula, but rather
- Incorrect. so much {to verb} but rather {verb}, it is not parallel, because to is missing after rather.

B. as much to change the formula as
- Incorrect. Same issue as in (A), we need to after as.

C. so much to change the formula, as rather to
- Incorrect. This one looks close to D with exception of the word rather. Also, the placement of a comma is quite weird here: "as" is not FANBOYS, and the comma is not needed because the part after "as" is not a clause.

D. so much to change the formula as to
- Correct. not so much X {to verb} as Y {to verb}

E. as much to change the formula, but to
- Incorrect.

Between (C) and (D), let's pick (D) because it is more concise than (C).

generis, can you please explain the situation around rather? Magoosh discusses that the correct idiom is not so much X as Y.
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The broad appeal of detective stories lies in the repetition of a familiar formula; the variations of skillful characterization and clever plot construction serve not so much to change the formula, but rather render it more appealing to even the most demanding reader.

A. so much to change the formula, but rather

B. as much to change the formula as - this is the comparison, which is not the intended meaning here

C. so much to change the formula, as rather to

D. so much to change the formula as to- so..as is the correct idiom

E. as much to change the formula, but to

The correct answer choice is D.
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The broad appeal of detective stories lies in the repetition of a familiar formula; the variations of skillful characterization and clever plot construction serve not so much to change the formula, but rather render it more appealing to even the most demanding reader.

A. so much to change the formula, but rather
not so much to X but rather to Y ->missing "to" after 'rather' for intended parallelism

B. as much to change the formula as
not as much to X as to Y -> missing "to" after 'as' for intended parallelism

C. so much to change the formula, as rather to
not so much to X as rather to Y -> rather is not needed in this comparison along with AS -> both intend the comparison... correct idiom for So is So...AS

D. so much to change the formula as to
not so much to X as to Y -> parallelism is correct

E. as much to change the formula, but to
not as much to X but to Y -> we generally use 'So' in negative forms instead of as. As...As is correct idiom not As..But

D is the answer!
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I chose (D). It took me 1 minute and 10 seconds.

To answer this question, we need to know
(1) As ... as OR Not so/as ... as --- Used to say two things are (OR are not) equal.
(2) Parallelism

(A) Does not use Not so much ... as...
(B) No parallelism between "to change the formula" and "render...".
(C) Does not use Not so much ... as...
(E) Does not use Not so much ... as... In addition, No parallelism between "to change the formula" and "render...".
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Imo. D

This question checks the knowledge about idom, parallelism and redundancy.

The broad appeal of detective stories lies in the repetition of a familiar formula; the variations of skillful characterization and clever plot construction serve not so much to change the formula, but rather render it more appealing to even the most demanding reader.

A. so much to change the formula, but rather - but and rather can never be used together as both represents contrast information.

B. as much to change the formula as - At a first glance idiomatically looks ok, but it's faulty parallelism. ,,,, as much to change,,,,,as to,,, but here to after as is missing.

C. so much to change the formula, as rather to - Here, as can be used as to present reason or comparison and rather is being used to present alternative but both can not used together, which makes the sentence with vauge meaning.

D. so much to change the formula as to - Looks idiomatically ok and parallelism also maintained. There is no redundancy error. Hold it.

E. as much to change the formula, but to[/quote] - as much to ,,,, but to,,. Here, wrong idiom is used
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The broad appeal of detective stories lies in the repetition of a familiar formula; the variations of skillful characterization and clever plot construction serve not so much to change the formula, but rather render it more appealing to even the most demanding reader.

A. so much to change the formula, but rather
B. as much to change the formula as
C. so much to change the formula, as rather to
D. so much to change the formula as to
E. as much to change the formula, but to

Since we have a "to" in the first half we need the "to" in the second half also.
That helps us in removing option A and B.

Quote:
C. so much to change the formula, as rather to
If we are using rather than we don't need to use so much. Or other way round.

Quote:
E. as much to change the formula, but to
Same. Incorrect Idiom.

D is the right answer.
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D is the answer. This is an idiom issue

The broad appeal of detective stories lies in the repetition of a familiar formula; the variations of skillful characterization and clever plot construction serve not so much to change the formula, but rather render it more appealing to even the most demanding reader.

A. so much to change the formula, but rather The construction is not so much to .....as to.....

B. as much to change the formula as The construction is not so much to .....as to...... I believe that to use this construction, it would have to be "as much to change the formula as to". This construction is missing the to.Secondly, even if the construction were corrected like i suggested ,it would have a meaning issue

C. so much to change the formula, as rather to Very undiomatic.

D. so much to change the formula as to Perfectly captures the proper idiom and the meaning of the sentence.

E. as much to change the formula, but to jUSt as I said in B, if we want to use as in this way it has to be "as much to .... as .Even if we corrected it this way,the construction would give us a different meaning
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The broad appeal of detective stories lies in the repetition of a familiar formula; the variations of skillful characterization and clever plot construction serve not so much to change the formula, but rather render it more appealing to even the most demanding reader.

here the idiom is so + adjective + as to + verb
plus here both willl strike a similar chord but not a comparison .

A. so much to change the formula, but rather( not stating contrast meaning. so wrong)

B. as much to change the formula as (those two phrases are not being compared. so wrong t as x as y)

C. so much to change the formula, as rather to ( not stating contrast meaning. so wrong)


D. so much to change the formula as to( idiom is stated perfectly but here with negative first part, not so..... adjective + as to render. hence correct choice)

E. as much to change the formula, but to ( not stating contrast meaning. so wrong)
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In option A, the idiom is not x but rather y. x: so much to change the formula; y: render it more appealing to even the most demanding reader. x and y are not parallel, and parallelism between x and y is key to the correct usage of the idiom in a sentence. In order for x and y to be parallel, y has to be: to render it more appealing to even the most demanding reader. A can be eliminated.

In B, the idiom is not x as y. Similarly, x and y must be parallel. In the context of B, x is: as much to change the formula. y is: render it more appealing to even the most demanding reader. x and y are not parallel. We can, therefore, eliminate B.

In C, the right construction of the idiom is not x but rather y. but is missing in the idiom. Another way the idiom can be looked at is so x as to y. In this case, rather is not necessary. We can also eliminate C.

In option E: the right idiom construction is not as x as y. there is no need for but in the construction.

Option D is the answer. The idiom used in that option is: not so x as to y. x in the context is: to change the formula, while y is: to render it more appealing. x and y are parallel and the idiom is utilized in the right structure. The answer is D.
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I have posted the official explanation HERE
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Not so much X as Y is the correct idiom. Only option D follows this .

Hence D is correct answer.
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Project SC Butler: Day 176: Sentence Correction (SC1)


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The broad appeal of detective stories lies in the repetition of a familiar formula; the variations of skillful characterization and clever plot construction serve not so much to change the formula, but rather render it more appealing to even the most demanding reader.

A. so much to change the formula, but rather
but rather isn't the right idiomatic usage therefore out

B. as much to change the formula as
so much is the right usage

C. so much to change the formula, as rather to
as rather isn't the right idiomatic usage

D. so much to change the formula as to
The meaning and the idoimatic usage is perfect

E. as much to change the formula, but to
Similar reasoning as A

Therefore IMO D
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